arrancar85: ... I tried my very best to put a story together, write the dialogue, and I really liked how it all turned out, so I want to share them. This is the best I could do.
Chapter 2 is much richer than the introductory chapter 1. The story, including flash-back and flash-forwards, is becoming quite interesting and exciting. You did very well! I liked especially the very good fuck of Mio and Tomiko. The best pic is mystics2page64 with the advise of the cute and insatiable Misaki to Mio (as well as to Mio's Creator and the rest of us): "You should not hold back. Let it out and have fun with it!" For one thing this means that Mio should have fucked Tomiko a couple more times in more different ways and give her more and more and more and more and more and more and more until ...
Well, I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter
arrancar85: I'll start with the very first 3DCG comic ... For this one, I decided to go with this simple name: Mystics ...
It seems we ain't see nothing yet
edit:
Just reading the story again I noticed that in this post I had used the name Mia instead of Mio. Apparantly at the time of writing (s)he was a bit feminine in my mind. I repaired it with this edit, and try to be more careful next time ...
edit 2:
In your post here she does introduce herself as Tomiko, so now I change my Tomika into Tomiko
You are warned now twice: I'm bad in remembering names correctly
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Wow, well done arra! I like it! Not too much text, perfect. I'd watch the girls in my nation's tricolor: red, white and green. xD Right, the white can be the cum.
Does this 3d custom girl have tentacle mod? Just asking, it isn't a hint to put some slimy monsters into the story, no... not at all. (Yes, it is!) xD
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I agree fully with Bobbie2b: your style is unique, fresh, hot, shining, ...
Especially Misaki is a perfect creation: a happy, horny, healthy sex beast
The assault by the extractor could have been more exciting if the extractor also would have been a big, shining and horny creature, beautiful in its own way; on penetrating Misaki's amazing body this would deform in a clearly visible and exciting way, also as seen from the outside. But probably you have an artistic reason to use this relatively flat and sometimes hardly visible extractor. Again I can't wait for the next episode ...
Every time I see you posting elsewhere I must think of Shakespeare, who had to be locked up - they say - to finish his plays otherwise he would be distracted too much ... In other words: go on with your artwork and don't do anything else before you're finished!
_________________ My avatar shows the first encounter of Yuki in the Land of Eternal Snow. Yuki would become my favorite character in the on-going Mystics Saga by arrancar85
The assault by the extractor could have been more exciting if the extractor also would have been a big, shining and horny creature, beautiful in its own way; on penetrating Misaki's amazing body this would deform in a clearly visible and exciting way, also as seen from the outside. But probably you have an artistic reason to use this relatively flat and sometimes hardly visible extractor. Again I can't wait for the next episode ...
I was trying all of the other tentacle mods I had and I just didn't like how it turned out, then I found one that works with the futa mods, so I decided to go with what you saw in chapter three. Sorry, I thought it was the best way to go in my opinion.
jacxxx: Every time I see you posting elsewhere I must think of Shakespeare, who had to be locked up - they say - to finish his plays otherwise he would be distracted too much ... In other words: go on with your artwork and don't do anything else before you're finished!
Yes, once I get an idea, I get right to work and remember to type everything immediately before I forget. I managed to get a good system going.
jacxxx: The best pic is mystics2page64 with the advise of the cute and insatiable Misaki to Mio (as well as to Mio's Creator and the rest of us): "You should not hold back. Let it out and have fun with it!" For one thing this means that Mio should have fucked Tomiko a couple more times in more different ways and give her more and more and more and more and more and more and more until ...
Well, if you thought the Mio X Tomiko scene in chapter two was good, I think you might like chapter four.
Here is the start of chapter four. Mio once again watches the night sky. Tomiko arrives shortly after...
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