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cholinms
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Here's some that were posted at AMV org.
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Tue Feb 05, 2008 3:03 am |
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Sparkster
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Right, for the sake of completeness, here's what I have so far in it's entirety.
If theredmaverick want's to help test and has some open minded friends to do so with, that'd be great. Just print them out as proxies, and test a Myset/10thed format for a basic gist.
Individual card impressions (what's good, what's bad, etc) are also welcome.
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Tue Feb 05, 2008 10:25 am |
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TheRedMaverick
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Awesome, the set. Not so sure what I can do for testing, by myself, though... feedback I can do, and if you want a game, I can do that with Magic Workstation... but that's about it. Yourset/10E is what I'd suspected would be appropriate. Seriously, though, would love to give you a game.
...on reflection, should probably be discussing this outside of the pictures board.
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Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:24 am |
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Sore wa Himitsu Desu
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Here's a card I made with that program. It should be a staple for any black Loli deck. I think it is both thematically correct, and relatively balanced.
The white card, I'm not sure about balance.
I like the third card, largely for the Flavor Text.
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Fri Feb 08, 2008 4:47 am |
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Sparkster
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I wouldn't call Going Higurashi a staple, it's upkeep cost is far too high to even have it sit in sideboards for aggro decks, and anyone who maindecks an entirely combat focused enchantment when very little blocking happens in constructed is wasting deck slots.
Kawaii! is fantasticly balanced, if slightly off color, allowing you to hold back mana to either counter removal or tutor at end of turn. Although I'd reduce the Lolicycling cost by 1 and change the main text to 'target creature gains shroud until end of turn, if it's a Loli, it becomes indestuctable until end of turn' just to give it slightly less liniarity. (I only just figured out that this cycles into itself just to make slide and threshold decks even more powerful)
Jailbait is totally broken, color bleed is fine if the effect is minor, but this is almost strictly better than Sower of Temptation, itself a definitive undercosted bomb, especially in the late game. Easier to splash too.
Yeah, I know, I know, I take this far too seriously.
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Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:32 am |
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Sore wa Himitsu Desu
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I don't think the upkeep cost is too high, it's just that it's too specific. In order to take advantage of the card you will want to build an entirely loli deck, which will mean you never get the benefit because you will almost immediately have to sac it.
I admit that Kawaii would be better in green or blue, but it felt like it should go in white anyways.
I knew jailbait was broken I put very little thought into it. I just liked the flavor text.
Just a few more cards. I'm not sure if I want to increase the cost of the Toy by 1, reduce the cost of loli's day out by either 1 or W, and I like the balance on Asuna.
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 1:58 am |
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Sore wa Himitsu Desu: I don't think the upkeep cost is too high, it's just that it's too specific. In order to take advantage of the card you will want to build an entirely loli deck, which will mean you never get the benefit because you will almost immediately have to sac it. Admittedly, it's been almost 10 years since I last played M:TG, but wouldn't you be able to put in some cards that generate non-Loli creatures (0/1 tokens or something) and sac those? Or do token creatures not count?
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 9:28 pm |
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Sore wa Himitsu Desu
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Well, as it's written, you could sac tokens, but agian it runs into the issue of focus. especially since black isnt exactly known for its prodigious token generation. I definitely need to work that one out
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 10:03 pm |
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Elivsh Toy... Unless you intended for it to stop sacrificed creatures going to the 'yard, it should just say "if a creature would go to the graveyard, instead regenerate it". Of course, if it is intented to stop sacrifice effects... then I think it should have some mana attached to the effect, and therefore change it from a triggered abilitity to an activated one (or is it presently a replacement ability? It triggers when a creature goes to the graveyard, but it also replaces that effect, so I'm unsure).
Asuna: AAH! TEXT! Just make the manacost all (B/W) symbols (unless it already is... are those Black skulls inside of White suns?), and then say that it all has to be one colour. Either make it cost 6 mana, or find a better way to do it, hey, 'cause that much text is crazy. Idea: Give her Kicker? Kicker WWW = Lifelink, Vigilance, while Kicker BBB = Deathtouch, First Strike.
I love your card frames, by the way. The cards look awesome when the image isn't stuck inside that tiny little box. Elvish Toy, does the picture come in a larger size, or did you get rid of it?
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Mon Feb 11, 2008 1:49 am |
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Sparkster
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Sore wa Himitsu Desu: Well, as it's written, you could sac tokens, but agian it runs into the issue of focus. especially since black isnt exactly known for its prodigious token generation. I definitely need to work that one out
Just a suggestion for a better version that keeps roughly the same flavour
Going Higurashi 1BB
Tribal Enchantment - Loli
Loli Creatures you control have flying, deathtouch and defender.
Sacrifice a non-loli creature: Creatures you control get +1/+1 and lose defender until end of turn, play this ability only once each turn.
See, now it's both a bonus and drawback for Lolis, can sit in play after a wrath and has at least some use outside of a dedicated Loli deck.
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Mon Feb 11, 2008 7:54 am |
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hey! im in the middle of making a set! i thot it was cute so i started 1 a while ago. ill post wen im done
editz; herez a sample hehe they r just sum of the common black cardz.
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Mon Feb 11, 2008 10:14 am |
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sparkster, ive looked at a lot of custom magic cards over the years, and yours are some of the best.
complex rules expressed as simple as possible, strong flavor, very little kitchen sink.
i won't comment on balance because i'm no pro.
mixing in lolis is just sweet sweet icing at this point.
good read. =)
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Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:57 pm |
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Well, I've actually got a finished set at this point, with 180 cards spread equally between color and rarity, at some point I should probably release it properly, the real question being if anyone would care.
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Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:36 am |
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Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:00 am |
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Well, I guess I'll just post it now then
And also sorted by color so the collectors numbers are all in order.
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Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:20 am |
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