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Hmm, hope this is the correct place to post.
Anyway I have taken it upon myself to translate all of Himeno Mikan's works. Starting with Chapter 4 of the comic "Lo Li Ru Re Lo".
If it is alright then I will be using this thread to post my updates to this chapter and hopefully to the rest of them eventually. So far I have the first 6 pages of chapter 4, I will include them in the attachments.
About these pages
1. I am still working on cloning backgrounds, so sfx effects and the title remain untranslated for now.
2. I modified the part about the turtle so that it will still fit but be more humorous.
3. I am still a complete noob at translating comics so somethings may be a little wrong, but I hope to become better I as I translate more.
Please leave comments via email or PM, but If it is alright I would like this thread to just be for my updates. Ty
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Replacing 1st page with updated one that has title included
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Thank you very much for sharing this with us, its lovely
Was the font choice your own? I would have personally preferred
something with rounded edges.
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Uh wow, I haven't really paid much attention to the font type. After I get half of this comic translated (page 9), I will go back and play with the font types. Page 7 and 8 are about done, I should be able to update to page 9 sometime today or tomorrow. Just a heads up, the dialog gets pretty silly
As I said before I am a noob at this, if font settings are important then I will make sure I practice with them. Ty
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You can poke me on skype or gtalk, I have some that might fit
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Alright, finished up to Page 9. Adding them to the attachments. Pages 11 and 12 are my favorite, so I will try to finish them up quickly.
I will try to translate all of the pages before going back to edit the font and maybe replace the sfx effects. But I am not to confident about that, there are SO MANY. They are everywhere in this comic, so they will only be translated if I can master the clone and restoration tools. Took me half an hour to learn how to use the rotate and movement tools, still can't figure out how to edit already placed text though.
Half way done!
Update: I have the script for pages 10,11, and 12 organized and translated. Just need to add the translated text to the cleaned pages. Love page 12
Will be adding them to the attachments in a few hours.
Alright, adding 10, 11, and 12 now.
Interestingly enough, the more text layers I add, the larger the file-size become. Anyway, I'll just clean 13, 14, and 15 tonight and get to translating them tomorrow.
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Alright, this should be the last update post for this chapter, though I will be adding the last 6 pages as attachments periodically throughout the day and maybe tomorrow.
Things to note
1. The little girl's name is Tsubame-chan, not Chiyau
2. The turtle's name is chubby/round turtle, not Mr.Turtle
3. I can't identify the name of the chapter yet, since the author has all of the symbols clustered together, I can't make them out. I can make out "Kou-re-be-evening-a-ku-shi-i-yo-n", which I am guessing to mean "Evening Paradise Drilling". Thats probably very close, but not 100% accurate.
I am considering changing the little girl's name to be correct, but Mr.turtle stays Mr.Turtle
For now however I will keep the name Chiyau, so i don't lose my flow.
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Awesome, a friend just sent me a Scantalation guide he got somewhere!
Immediately after I finish translating pages 16, 17, and 18 I need to replace all of the font with comic san font, it looks so much more natural
I will also replace any instance of the word "ass" with butt. But I need to keep Pussy and Penis in there, since anything else isn't correct.
And lastly I am advised to use all capital letters where it seems appropriate. And thats mostly everywhere
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The script for the last 3 pages have been lain out, organized, and translated. I will now proceed to add the text to the cleaned pages. Almost done
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AH! Here are the final 3 pages and a personal credit one.
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Total Time spent on Chapter 4 was about 5 days.
I really did plan on going back and editing everything, but I can't figure out how to edit already placed text. I can only re-clean it and input new text... and I really ain't feeling that
If anyone has a Himeno Mikan Chapter that they would like translated, then contact me at Mistvern21@gmail.com. Just specify the chapter if it comes from the "Lo Li Ru Re Lo" comic. There are also at least half a dozen Himeno Mikan chapters portrayed in various COMIC LO vol 50+. If you have one that comes from a COMIC LO, then just specify which volume. Ty
If I get no contacts within about a 3-7 day period, I'll just start on Chapter 2
During that time I'll be relaxing and watching GIMP and Photoshop tutorials, hehe.
I should be able to translate much better and faster next time.
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Lol, I was just reading though a few COMIC LO and there are so many chapters of stuff that would be SO SO much easier to translate then the last one I did was. So if anyone has any story that they would like translated then contact me. However it must have
1. Less than 20 pages
2. Super cute adorable Loli
3. Light hearted and funny story
4. Script that is a mixture of JAPANESE Hiragani, Katanana, and Kanji. (I can't do chinese stuff)
I don't do any of that dark, bloody rape crap, so please don't ask for it. I'm bored now since I finished my last chapter, it was kinda fun doing something like that. I would like to get to work translating something immediately so don't hesitate to contact me if you have something that fit my criteria, I won't bite
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Okie Dokie, got a request from a friend to do Chapter 5 from the same one that last chapter came from. Loli looks very cute, but is alot wiser than the one in chapter 4. I accept this request and will began working on Chapter 5 immediately.
I have realized that the table of contents hold all of the chapter titles (duh!), and it is ALOT easier to read.
The name of chapter 5 is hi-mi-tsu-no-do-ri-ru
Everyone knows that Himitsu represents Secret, and I understand the rest to stand for Drill. I will replace the word Drill with Practice though, since I believe it is better suited.
I will add up to six of the translated pages of "Secret Practice", to this post when I finish translating them. This may take anywhere between 1 day and a week, depending on what comes up. Time to get started!
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Update- The first page is just crazy ridiculous with the amount of kanji symbols it has. The Kanji is obviously being used to tell the summary of the story. It is taking forever to identify all of the ones I don't recognize. The little girl's name is Akane-chan and the man this time is called "Sensei". I want this chapter to be translated perfectly, so I will have to spend a little more time of pages 1 and 2 before I can speed up. Akane-chan is so very adorable on page 2
Also, a more appropriate name for the title would be "Secret Lessons", it fits PERFECTLY with the summary so far.
Alright got all of the kanji figured out! Shaping up to quite the cute story : )
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Stopping here for about a day or 2 to reformat the first 2 pages and work on the next few. I am getting many questions regarding the font type. Apparently Times new roman, Arial, and even Comic Sans are not popular choices. I have been advised to use Wild-words or Anime-ace. Will update when I am finish
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Woot just got finished with several manga cleaning and editing tutorials. I feel I am alot better than before. Adding the revised 1st and 2nd page to the attachments.
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Still working on everything. Decided that I would rather release "after" I complete the entire chapter. Currently on page 8. I want this one to be done right.
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Alright, finally have the entire 16 pages of script organized and translated for the most part. Now need to go back and clean all of the pages, go through and recheck the translations, and then add them to the pages. Should be finished by Friday night or Saturday morning.
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ALMOST DONE! All of the pages are cleaned and the entire scrip is translated. Now I just need to spend about an hour or 2 putting in all of the text layers. This is coming along quite nicely, will definitely be done before the weekend!
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Done, here is all 16 pages.
Please enjoy the cute antics of Akane-chan!
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:29 am |
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The other post could only hold 10 attachments, so here is the other 6.
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Alright next project has been determined. It involves a currently unnamed cute and tanned loli in a work entitled "What Are You Doing?"
There is no ETA yet for the translation
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This comic is being put on hold, just looked over Mikan's works and I know what I want. What I want is chapter 10 from "Lo Li Ru RE Lo" comic. Will probably do the tanned loli after another translation or 2, but I currently really want that chapter 10. Will be updating my sig accordingly
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Won't be able to translate chapter 10, it uses a kanji symbol I am unfamilar with and CAN'T identify. This kanji symbol is used constantly over and over, and until I figure out what it is, I won't be translating this chapter. Will be doing chapter 3 in the mean time. It looks simple enough
Adding the symbol that I can't identify to the attachments, in case someone else can figure out.
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Okay figured out what the symbol means, I can do chapter 10 now. I will do it for my fifth translation project.
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Alright here is the first page of Chapter 3! Think I am gonna like this chapter, but at 20 pages this is the biggest one I have done yet.
Pretty cute so far and the next few pages looks even cuter. The loli in this one is Yui-chan and the title is called "Enmusubi" which translates to "Love Knot".
I will be adding the pages of this chapter to this post as I translate them.
Oh my! I like how this story is progressing! I just love how Himeno makes sex not about the sex
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Wow, the translation of Page 7 was a nightmare... text bubbles and sfx EVERYWHERE! lol,I still took care of it though. ONWARDS!
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Last update for this post, here is page 10. I admit it was the easiest page so far
HALFWAY DONE!
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Alright, no more updates until the entire thing is completed. I will attach the last 10 to this post when I am finished with all of them. LETS DO THIS!
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Thats another one fully translated!
Not sure what my next target is yet. Gotta take a small break and then go looking around loli manga and see what motivates me most. Probably going to be an Isawa Noori Chapter I have had my eye on for a while.
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Alright have chosen my next 2 targets. The himeno mikan chapter that is found in Comic Lo Vol 77 and chapter 10 from the main comic.
Will be doing the comic lo 77 one first. Will add pages as they are translated
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Heh, that was my easiest first page yet : )
Chapter is titled "I Already Know" and the loli is named Kana-chan.
Hehe, I think I like Kana-chan
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I have the script organized and translated completely for pages up to 11. I will however finish up the last 7 pages of script before I began adding them to the cleaned pages. Less likely to make a typo mistake this way.
When all is done I will add pages 6-10 to this post. And then make a new post for pages 11 - 18
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Almost done, will release the rest of the pages sometime tomorrow. And will then try to get started on chapter 10 immediately.
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Phew, I am glad I waited to do the last pages first before adding the rest. The translation of pages 17 and 18 clearly didn't match the situation and I had to go back and edit the dialog up to page 6. Lack of understanding a few kanjis led to that, but I am confident that everything is in order now. Will proceed now with checking for errors, adding in the text to the clean pages, and releasing them here. Shouldn't take more than a few hours.
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Okay, been updated to page 10. Will add the last 8 pages to this post when I am done adding the text to all 8 of them.
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Done! Now on to the next!
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