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hntbr
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Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:01 am |
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Izidor
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It looks great!
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Sat Sep 05, 2015 7:56 am |
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hntbr
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Thanks!!
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Sat Sep 05, 2015 10:17 am |
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hntbr
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Hey guys... update... I'm making a manga with my characters, I have to do it sketchy like this because it takes a long time to paint in other ways, but I hope you like it
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Tue Sep 08, 2015 2:32 pm |
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jacxxx
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I like it very much hnt br
Sexy sketch promising a sexy story
... I'm looking forward to this manga
Edit Wednesday Sep 09, 2015 after reading post below:
Brilliant Story
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Tue Sep 08, 2015 4:11 pm |
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hntbr
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First page finished!
Base story introduction:
Murphy is a black man, recently him has married with Lisa, a blonde woman with green eyes, Lisa has two twin children from a former relationship, a boy named Ashley and a girl named Daisy, both has green eyes and brown hair (Ashley is easily mistaken for a girl, because he has an unisex name and usually uses girls clothes and makeups).
They went living in the Murphy's apartment, now Murphy is the Ashley and Daisy's stepfather.
In this manga:
In friday, Lisa and Daisy were travelling to other state to visit the Lisa's parents and they'll be out until monday, Ashley had to stay in home to finish some school tasks and Murphy was taking care of him. Now it's saturday, Murphy has invited your best friend, Richard, to play video games with him and Ashley and now it starts.
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Wed Sep 09, 2015 2:58 pm |
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I'm looking forward to this. Great art too.
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Fri Sep 11, 2015 6:10 am |
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hntbr
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Hey guys, I'm here for an update of my manga
I did some pages here (5 pages are done), but I tried to colorize the first page and I liked it, I'm thinking to do it with all pages
I want an opinion, black and white or colorized?
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Wed Nov 25, 2015 10:02 pm |
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jacxxx
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hntbr: I want an opinion, black and white or colorized? I have been browsing and comparing the three images above a lot of times (using the arrow keys) and the middle one appears most enjoyable to me :oops (I didn't expect that myself, the coloured thumbnail looks much hotter than the bw ones. That's why I took a very careful look before I came to my conclusion)
The text is very hot and promising. However imo it should be edited by a dedicated english native speaker
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Wed Dec 02, 2015 8:58 pm |
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IxFa
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I vote black and white as well
imo it should be edited by a dedicated english native speaker
He has a good point.
If you'd like, I could proofread your script before you add it to the pictures. Wouldn't take long, and English writing is my profession.
_________________ PM me! I can help you with questions regarding LAH, the chatroom, or I can just keep you company. I hope you enjoy LAH!
We even have a semi-official Discord! The art channel is great and general is active.
Check out LAH's Authors! Plenty of stories to browse!
Current project(s):
[LAH needs help!] - [Helping others :)] - [Quest/Scene Scripts] - [Corruption of Champions Loli]
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Wed Dec 02, 2015 9:03 pm |
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hntbr
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Thanks alot for all feedback, I'll continuing doing in black n white
jacxxx:
hntbr: I want an opinion, black and white or colorized? I have been browsing and comparing the three images above a lot of times (using the arrow keys) and the middle one appears most enjoyable to me :oops (I didn't expect that myself, the coloured thumbnail looks much hotter than the bw ones. That's why I took a very careful look before I came to my conclusion)
The text is very hot and promising. However imo it should be edited by a dedicated english native speaker
IxFa: I vote black and white as well
imo it should be edited by a dedicated english native speaker
He has a good point.
If you'd like, I could proofread your script before you add it to the pictures. Wouldn't take long, and English writing is my profession.
IxFa, I'll really love it!! I can send you the texts and the pages design before I post here
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Thu Dec 03, 2015 12:51 pm |
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IxFa
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You shouldn't quote entire posts, only the most relevant snippets. Most forums frown upon full quotes.
Send it over any time. I'll read through and send you a corrected version. Happy to help.
_________________ PM me! I can help you with questions regarding LAH, the chatroom, or I can just keep you company. I hope you enjoy LAH!
We even have a semi-official Discord! The art channel is great and general is active.
Check out LAH's Authors! Plenty of stories to browse!
Current project(s):
[LAH needs help!] - [Helping others :)] - [Quest/Scene Scripts] - [Corruption of Champions Loli]
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Sun Dec 06, 2015 6:17 pm |
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hntbr
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IxFa so thanks, I'll send you the texts via PM as soon as I can
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Mon Dec 07, 2015 7:55 am |
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hntbr
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Hey guys I'm back!
I apologize because I was been away for a long time, I was traveling on vacation
I have a bad and a good news
I lost all pages I'd drawn, but the good news is that I'm redrawing my manga and it's getting a little better than the old one
I'm doing some changes in the scenes and in the appearance of the characters, but preserving the base story, only the first few pages will be colored (to introduce the character's looks), and the others are be black and white, as soon as I can I'll post more updates
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Thu Feb 04, 2016 11:56 am |
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jacxxx
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Glad you're back, hntbr. The time has come for some fresh brazilian hentai
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Sat Feb 13, 2016 4:40 pm |
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