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That was very good. Thank you to everyone that worked on it!
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Any more comments anyone? Good or bad? It doesnt matter if it's praise or not, we would like feedback so we can continue to provide you all with great releases
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feather
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>.> I haven't read it yet. Does that count, kouhei-kun?
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 2:05 am |
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Waaaiii~ !
<- weak against anything cute
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:15 pm |
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kouhei
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feather: >.> I haven't read it yet. Does that count, kouhei-kun?
Well, I hope you will enjoy it when you read it. Please let us know what you think
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 4:35 am |
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excellent work !!!
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 2:26 pm |
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feather
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What can I say? Looks good. Some of the english is ever so slightly awkward, and IMO Frag's colorizations are obviously so, but that's just nit-picking.
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 6:33 pm |
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kouhei
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feather: What can I say? Looks good.
As an overall assessment, that's great to hear
feather: Some of the english is ever so slightly awkward
Though I agreee to a certain extent, Sat wanted to be as true to the original wording as possible.
Just because I am curious, do you think translations should be literal or functional?
feather: and IMO Frag's colorizations are obviously so, but that's just nit-picking.
Every bit of practice helps, but I do agree the color blends etc could be a little better, but on the whole I think he did a good job for one of his first "official" released works.
I will take it that since you made no comments about the backgrounds in around and near the text bubbles that I did a reasonable job of recreating the missing areas. On closer inspection, do you think there is anything I can do to improve the cleaning/background recreation? Almost all the text bubbles were originally vertical, but I flipped them horizontal, resized them when necessary, and I filled in the blank areas.
As I would like to do more manga cleaning projects, any fedback you can offer on my part of the work woulf be really appreciated.
Thank you for taknig teh time to make a comment Feather
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:17 pm |
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feather
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kouhei: Just because I am curious, do you think translations should be literal or functional? Though I would want it to be as true to the original as possible, as an english major,
kouhei:
feather: and IMO Frag's colorizations are obviously so, but that's just nit-picking.
Every bit of practice helps, but I do agree the color blends etc could be a little better, but on the whole I think he did a good job for one of his first "official" released works. si, es bueno.
kouhei: I will take it that since you made no comments about the backgrounds in around and near the text bubbles that I did a reasonable job of recreating the missing areas. On closer inspection, do you think there is anything I can do to improve the cleaning/background recreation? Almost all the text bubbles were originally vertical, but I flipped them horizontal, resized them when necessary, and I filled in the blank areas. It took me some thinking just to figure out what you did. And only by looking specifically for your clean-ups could I find any. I think any criticism I could give you would be unnecessary and only lead to exacerbating your OCD for no appreciable gain.
Oh, and I forgot to ask why Ater isn't credited for his rendering of Feather-chan?
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Fri Sep 21, 2007 1:27 am |
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kouhei
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feather:
kouhei: Just because I am curious, do you think translations should be literal or functional? Though I would want it to be as true to the original as possible, as an english major,
We do share that opinion then
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kouhei:
feather: and IMO Frag's colorizations are obviously so, but that's just nit-picking.
Every bit of practice helps, but I do agree the color blends etc could be a little better, but on the whole I think he did a good job for one of his first "official" released works. si, es bueno.
I am glad you agree, I think Frag will continue to improve the more he practices. I look forward to seeing his future coloring.
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kouhei: I will take it that since you made no comments about the backgrounds in around and near the text bubbles that I did a reasonable job of recreating the missing areas. On closer inspection, do you think there is anything I can do to improve the cleaning/background recreation? Almost all the text bubbles were originally vertical, but I flipped them horizontal, resized them when necessary, and I filled in the blank areas. It took me some thinking just to figure out what you did. And only by looking specifically for your clean-ups could I find any. I think any criticism I could give you would be unnecessary and only lead to exacerbating your OCD for no appreciable gain.
Good that makes me want to do even more cleaning
feather: Oh, and I forgot to ask why Ater isn't credited for his rendering of Feather-chan?
I agree, Alter should have been given credit for his rendering of feather-chan. She is very cute, and Alter is very deserving of credit. She was added at the last moment by Sat so I think it was an accidental oversight. I am sure once he realizes the problem (I will point it out to him) he will correct it. I think Sat wasn't sure about using that one because she is not the "Official" mascot, and may not get much exposure in light of other works.
Thank You for continuing to procide us with feedback Feather, it helps us make a better release
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Wow, that was.... just astounding. Good choice for a translate, and extremely well done.
You guys should fight crime or something.
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Sat Sep 22, 2007 6:24 am |
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kouhei
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brianPeppers: Wow, that was.... just astounding. Good choice for a translate, and extremely well done.
You guys should fight crime or something.
Maybe we do...This has all been an elaborate trap to draw people out.
The Van will be arriving shortly.
j/k
Glad you like the work.
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Sat Sep 22, 2007 1:55 pm |
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hehe waiting for aprt 2 (is there a part 2?)
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:33 am |
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Very nice work
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 7:40 am |
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Assosson: hehe waiting for aprt 2 (is there a part 2?)
There are 2 more, if i know well.
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 9:42 am |
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