Loli Strip - A Loli Comic Strip

feather:
Loli Strip isn't likely to be praised by the NY Times. I am pleased to find that I'm able to write these things; I've always had some trouble with comedy.

A bit of miscellania : Loli spends her time online (as she's seen here), reading trashy romance stories, manga and doujins. Faye spends her time online looking at porn.

Maybe not the NY times but if Kodomo no Jikan can be Marketed in North America as Nymphet then surely your Lolistrip has every bit the same validity as an artform and entertainment.

On a side note, I can relate to Loli and Faye both as far as their stated interests Feather Kawaii 2

ja ne
l8r Kay?

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"Affection is responsible for nine-tenths of whatever solid and durable happiness there is in our lives." (C.S. Lewis)

I think I mostly go with Faye's interests myself. Twisted Evil

Ahem.

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Heh, that's the best one yet.
Although, helpful hint: Your eyes seem off somehow.

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all 'round, or in a specific instance?

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On and off. The left and right one don't match up anatimacaly sometimes. I used to have the exact same problem.
In fact I have art books from my early work, where something was always covering one of the eyes.

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Hm . . .

I generally don't think much of the eyes, unless they're REALLY wrong, like one's way off or something. I'll probably even redesign hers; those are my generic eyes. But symmetry has always been an issue with me . . .

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I'm uncertain about the SD bit, but even so, part II of "I've Got Nothing to Wear"

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I think those are great Feather Kawaii 2

but I do agree with Nameless, the eyes do seem a little "off" for some reason.

ja ne
l8r Kay?

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"Affection is responsible for nine-tenths of whatever solid and durable happiness there is in our lives." (C.S. Lewis)

Ja ja . . . but what do you REALLY think?

But seriously, does the final frame of #4 really work? I mean, it's essentially filler, since the punch-line is in the second frame. Other third frames for this one would include her looking at the reader and saying "She broke the fourth wall!", or screaming at Faye, "Stop Ruining my Life!"

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For me it works.
The "silent anger" allows each reader to think for themselves what she's thinking right now. For me it's like "Damn, why didn't I think of it, for others it might be "where can I get a big fly swatter to make Fayes life a bit more... interesting".

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Fly swatter!

*Writes it down*

Faye gets a nemesis eventually, so a fly swatter may just make an appearance . . .

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I thought you would like that. (I wonder if she's weak to bug nets like Cosmo & Wanda)

I thought the dark cloud ending was great, since it allows the joke from before to really sink in.

I should thank everyone for their encouragement and feedback. I couldn't do it without you.

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