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Taakal
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Here's the next one. It took a while (and next one might even take longer, because this one was quite far develloped when I started posting here).
Since I've already shown Daddy cumming, I also wanted to show Vickys orgasm (actually this takes place before the images which show Dad's orgasm). And she's cumming hard, I hope you can see that. Concerning the pee, I like that and I intend to do more of that in future images (though it's not easy to paint pee). And now I wait for your comments. I hope there will be a few.
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Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:38 pm |
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Seven
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Great work! Thanks for sharing!
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Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:54 pm |
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Anyien
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The artwork is good. But to me the girls expression looks more like pain than an orgasm. I´m afraid i have no clue how to do it since i don´t draw, but her expression should be softer.
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Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:10 pm |
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Great start !
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Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:29 am |
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lolikonfreak
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I love it! In my humble non-artist opinion you just need to work a liiiiiiiiiitle bit on the eyes, Idk exactly what if they are too big or too close to each other or something, but they are really REALLY awesome
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 4:31 am |
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Nice work, what I like is the erection is not overly large when enormous it takes it too far from reality and therefore less erotic. Also the urination or squirting is a nice addition.
Good work, thank you.
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Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:55 am |
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very nice thank you
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Thu Oct 06, 2011 8:46 pm |
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Taakal
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After quite some time, here's a new image.
Not the same series this time (though I still plan to do more pics of that series). A few new things. my first boy with Mama-image, a more western graphic-style compared to my usual hentai-style and this time I did lights and shadows with soft brushes instead of hard contrasts. I hope you like it, there might be more to come. Please comment.
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Tue Mar 05, 2013 10:21 am |
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bobbie2b
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Nice work.... love to see more of son with mommy.....` especially like to see “more” of him thanks for sharing
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Wed Mar 06, 2013 4:48 pm |
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Thanks for sharing your art with all of us. I would love to see more. Also your mother son pic is great. Love the color and the look of the mom. Again thanks
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Thu Mar 07, 2013 12:19 am |
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Hi there. I just happen to run across your thread here and you wanted feedback so here it is.
Im gonna talk about the 1st picture:
The girls figure and pose is pretty good, the finger in the mouth is great, the shoulder is nicely done, the butt is nice. The guy's figure is good too.
Problem is the lines. They are all the same thickness! You have to make some lines thicker while the folds in the clothes thinner. The lines are just too perfect, it's unnatural! The whole drawing has an unnatural feeling to it, line it was done by an AI robot and not a human being. Maybe it's those digital tools you are using.
The girl's eyes kinda creep me she looks like those girls who put a full body mask of a manga character.
One question: which artists are you fans of? Maybe you need to look at some more artists whose styles are looser and use maybe a brush instead of just digital pen. I can give you the names of a few that are old fashioned but may loosen your hand. Stan Drake and Paul Gillon are 1950s~1060 style art done with brush. Paul Pope is a contemporary artist who is pretty wild with a brush!
Start by varying the thickness!
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Sun Mar 10, 2013 1:58 am |
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Taakal
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@ all: thanks for your nice comments, they're very much appreciated.
@ Hoyeru: thanks for your feedback. I guess, you won't like this one that much either since the thickness of the lines is not very variable, but I will try to do that in the future (actually I tried it a little with the Mom-Boy-image which I started after this one). And your right, varying the line-thickness is a little more difficult when painting digitally instead of with pen and paper. But you only mentioned the first image. What do you think about the others? Btw, concerning artists, I especially like Urushihara, but I don't think that's visible in my images.
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Sat Mar 16, 2013 4:01 pm |
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Like !
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Sat Mar 16, 2013 6:58 pm |
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Wow this latest pic is brilliant ! i mean the look on her face is hotter then hell. Great job !
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Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:23 am |
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I like the art - a lot - I would like to see you do a complete story. Thanks.
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Wed Mar 20, 2013 6:23 pm |
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