Unusual children's books - the swimming lesson (end)

Well done, Tonkato! I appreciate the work that you've done to blend in your changes with the original works. As I recall the original artist really did some nice detailed paintings in the later books so you will have a challenge ahead of you! Smile

Thanks for these. I hope you have a great 2011!

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You sir are Amazing, While I have not seen many works like this; I must say your work is by far the best. Thank you for your incredible post. Also on a bit a side note, I see that this is your 3rd story, and I was wondering if you would be so kind as to post the 1st and 2nd if you have them or the time? I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Thank you again for the amazing post. Very Happy

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Tonkato:
As I said earlier on the thread, I prefer to experiment a new technique first. I'll finish the beach story later.

Awww. Oh well. Good luck with the new technique.

very good job, thank you Smile

I registered for this

Ditto; Very good job. I registered for your artwork also.
I wish my first readers books had been written like this.
Thanks for all the time you spent working on these.

RTH

Stunningly nice. Gentle outer-course shows just how needless it is to be greedy and destructive. Sadly, it is not the normal cannon in child-love cartoons even though it is much closer to showing actual love.

I am not by any means condoning this activity outside of fantasy, but it does seem much closer to the sort of self-control and conduct a loli-lover should exhibit in a world where that activity might be acceptable.

This sort of sexual activity reminds me of fireworks; Most are responsible enough to light the works and enjoy the show, but after a few people blow their fingers off, legislation gets passed and then no-one can enjoy fireworks. Because of the villains and simpletons in our society, the majority of gentle lovers are kept from expressing their love and having clean, responsible fun. This allegory runs deep and shows how the human ape creature seeks to control things that it doesn't understand.

Please realize that I am not just guarding my words, I only wish to draw clear lines on how I understand this material. I have very specific feelings outside of simple animal arousal for all of us scattered human apes of all ages. I understand us and I am speaking outside of pedophilic bias.

I really am stunned, it's great work. Good job, and thank you for seeing something sacred in your heart and sharing it.

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very very nice. you are imitating those Martine books I have never seen seen except for the covers. Excellent work man. They were posted on 4chan /b several days ago and after hunting for a while somebody on not4chan told me to look here for your name. Im so glad I found it.

Wonderful stuff! I look forward to seeing more of these. Your adjustments are great. I can only imagine what you had to work with if these are just edits. Those French are quite the libertines!
Keep up the good work!

It is delightful! Thank you very much! I look forward continuations!

Wow! This thread looks like a success judging by the numbers of comments.

I'll have the next episode posted before Friday.

Fogbank:
Well done, Tonkato! I appreciate the work that you've done to blend in your changes with the original works. As I recall the original artist really did some nice detailed paintings in the later books so you will have a challenge ahead of you! Thanks for these. I hope you have a great 2011!

Thank you Fogbank and as you said, it is a challenge indeed.

RogueAssasin22:
Also on a bit a side note, I see that this is your 3rd story, and I was wondering if you would be so kind as to post the 1st and 2nd if you have them or the time? I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Thank you again for the amazing post.

Actually, I edit the title of the thread each time I post a new story. The beach episode is the third one, while the boat episode is the first, et caetera.

obieobieobie:
very good job, thank you I registered for this

Red Tailed Hawk:
Ditto; Very good job. I registered for your artwork also.
I wish my first readers books had been written like this.
Thanks for all the time you spent working on these.
RTH

I'm glad if I can attract new members here. Very Happy

4stray:
I really am stunned, it's great work. Good job, and thank you for seeing something sacred in your heart and sharing it.

Thank you for your praise. My aim is certainly not to promote any kind of sexual activity, too.

hoyeru:
very very nice. you are imitating those Martine books I have never seen seen except for the covers. Excellent work man. They were posted on 4chan /b several days ago and after hunting for a while somebody on not4chan told me to look here for your name. Im so glad I found it.

I didn't know they were posted on 4chan /b Surprised

I'll do a research.

anifan:
Wonderful stuff! I look forward to seeing more of these. Your adjustments are great. I can only imagine what you had to work with if these are just edits. Those French are quite the libertines!

Er... actually, it's french-speaking Belgium, not France. But thank you! Smile

nekomimi7:
It is delightful! Thank you very much! I look forward continuations!

This sure is good. Very Happy

omg uh
*don't know what to say*
sweet Feather-chan Annoyed

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The Girl's Club fan Club's Club!!

The story at the beach was very good. Loved it very much. Can't wait for more. Very Happy

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Hello everybody, here comes the new episode.

Once again, I warn you that I'm a non-native English speaker, so I apologize for the grammatical errors.

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Yay!