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YAY! I get to be the first to comment on it XD hehehe
You've improved a LOT since your first drawings XD
Your line art has improved a lot, it looks much cleaner. The eyes seem very high but I guess that could be the style you were going for? Everything else on the head looks great ^__^
Like always, I gotta give CC! I feel like the big brother of LAH lol
The body is looking a lot better but there's still some funky stuff going on!
-her torso looks a little funky. on the inner left side (our right) there's a dent o__O owwie lol. in reality, ribcages always curve outwards but it's not uncommon in animes for it to just slope in whichever direction they're moving.
-if you moved her belly button up a bit, it would make the placement of her hips seem a little more natural
-her left leg (on our right) is far too short compared to her other one lol *bonk* you have eyes buddy! use them ;3
It's still definitely an improvement! Keep practicing and working on using structures! *thumbs up*
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Tue May 25, 2010 7:11 am |
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Loli-master
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Well, I did my best to take into account what you said Forsaken by tweaking the same picture, looks a bit better but that's enough touching up for that one XD working on a new one.
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Wed May 26, 2010 3:49 pm |
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I went with a more cartoony manga style here...I kinda like it im gonna try do more like this thinking about changing the signature too...it's barely visible in this picture :\
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:32 am |
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DarkSign
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Heya LM! You are improving!! Nice!!
The faces are really good for me now
I loved your kitty one
Keep improving dude!
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Tue Jun 01, 2010 11:08 pm |
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Loli-master
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Thanks DarkSign anyways these are just a couple pictures I scribbled when I was bored, one was from maybe 3 months ago now.
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:58 pm |
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good drawings
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Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:21 pm |
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Loli-master
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some new ones....I keep forgetting to go over the sig with pen then I get too lazy >_>
they were supposed to be the same person but the one in the dress looks alot more like a lolier sister which is all good I guess
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:41 pm |
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DarkSign
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Oh, not bad dude! Good ones!
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Wed Jun 09, 2010 2:50 am |
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Loli-master
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Thanks DarkSign
2 new ones
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Thu Jun 17, 2010 2:43 pm |
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Loli-master
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Update anyways I was thinking of going back and coloring some of the older drawings dunno if I should try and use what I got now or wait until I get CS4 all I got now is fireworks and flash but meh...I'll give it more thought
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Sat Jun 26, 2010 2:25 am |
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MOAR!
I went back to the other style I had going before the other few pics I was experimenting with a different eye style and ended up drawing a full picture, personally I think it awesomely cute I left it in pencil for now....I wasn't really sure if inking it would ruin it or not.
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:16 am |
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Loli-master
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Inked the previous picture, also changed the siggy to suit my DA name
also new picture
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 6:23 am |
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Got the colouring done for this picture at last I kinda like it
Also a friend of mine saw this while I was working on it and thought I was perverted >:O The nerve
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Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:14 am |
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lolikonfreak
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Getting better drawing already my friend. And good coloring... I can't do either one...
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Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:00 pm |
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Thanks ^-^ I started working on coloring that second picture up there tried experimenting with another coloring technique....really wish I hadn't, I pretty much rage quit so I'm working on another picture atm
Also I think I might redo the eyes on that one if I ever get the time
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Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:24 am |
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