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Yachi
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well i wanted to try a comic and just started =/
so me scribbled around an made the first page
its just rough at first but me hope to make a long and good comic^^'
wanted to try it just now^^'
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| Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:56 pm |
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good try keep it up
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| Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:23 pm |
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Yachi
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thx^^
rough again XD
i still paint on it but will post it so that u can see what me is thinking =P
edit: a bit better outlines and overwork XD
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page 3 the first pics of the girl falling down XD
(thinking to make her to the role character instead of the blind one^^')
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Nice! Once it's finished I think these will look great! Keep at it! Good job!
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| Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:05 am |
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hm..
since i had no answer to that for more months i decided, not to work on that one anymore..-.-
cuz i don't like doubleposts and that without any reply....thats not that i want to v.v
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Yeah. o.O the artist board seems pretty slow... I wish more people would come in and add some CC or just any sort of comments.
You're off to a great start on your manga (it's better then what I can do!!!), don't get discouraged from no one saying anything... being an artist is a lonely and sometime unfulfilling path... which is why I try to get people in to posting here more often =)
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| Sat Jul 18, 2009 11:19 pm |
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Good stuff so far. I'd love to see this stuff more polished. It's a great foundation on the pencil level.
I also agree that this place needs more CC, and stuff beyond either "IT'S GREAT!" or "It sucks..." That, and people that actually read the text in a post before commenting. lol
I'm a bit of a hypocrite, myself, because I tend to be quiet just because I see so much silence around here, compared to many other sites.
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| Thu Jul 23, 2009 9:59 am |
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Yachi
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thanks
now i think about starting an other one
this one was on ps only with using a tablet
but now i found back to pencil and ink
but thinking about that comic, i see me facing new problems
like painting the background there the comic happens...
or some different and hard poses 
the comic a i think about now, is a yuri fantasy and kong fu story with ninjas XD
but this time i try it with an other pair of girls
a small cut and shy girls and a little bit older and active girl 
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| Wed Nov 11, 2009 7:16 pm |
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I know how important it is to be encouraged as an artist.
I am going to tell you, you have a natural talent for this, you have a sense of action and motion in your pictures, of form. Your sketchy strokes bring your ideas to life nicely, now you need to practice placing ink lines or soft lead pencil lines to strengthen the edges of the objects you draw.
To me it's RENDER with light sketching, then CUT with hard edges. The CUT part is the easy part, though it is more intimidating because if you cut wrong, you've got a dark line that is either difficult or impossible to erase.
People are not going to encourage you on a regular basis, not because you aren't a good artist, but because that is simply how it goes. You have to find a reason to draw within yourself and not from the outside. Sure, a picture does not feel finished until you get an audience response, but if you don't get a response, even if you are very proud of a picture you've done, don't let silence keep you from making more pictures.
Nothing brings you closer to perfect like practice. Lay those lines down, good work.
Being an artist is a rare blessing that opens the door to something that can be both work and fun.
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| Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:45 pm |
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Hey sorry I didn't comment on your thread earlier Yachi. I'm impressed with some of the body sketches you have, the proportions and angles seem good. The major and obvious thing is your confidence in your line work, which is ok since it's the rough draft anyway, but getting closer to a nice single line to describe a contour is always ideal.
I'd say practice on your faces, even try tracing some of your favorite manga or anime style faces, it may seem pointless, but if you do it enough, your mind will automatically remember what looks right.
I like the way the story is coming along as well, it's interesting and original the way you have the girls get close to each other. I say keep going, there's nothing more fun to draw than sexy little lolis!
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