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Finally finished! So many life factors tried to take all my time away from this, but I managed to carve out enough time to get it done.
It runs in the Family Part 2
Pamela punishes her little sister Lily for tattling on her.
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| Thu Mar 20, 2014 1:30 pm |
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Excellent art as usual but way too much text. Waaay too much. The focus should be on the art itself and not on the words. You need to cut at least 70% of it. The only thing should be the "tattle on me" and the remark about the mom. hat way you can segue into adding the mother to the scene with another image, hint hint. That was one of Randy Dave's problems too, he had way too much text sometimes. Look how spare Foggy is with his text. By itself the art and the situation is hot enough. This could really make a hawt mini comic.
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| Fri Mar 21, 2014 12:27 am |
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Thanks for showing us the final version - it was cool to see the journey from sketch to finished version. It looks to me like big sister is missing a right elbow that would be seen past the girl's ponytail. Impressed at how talkative the girls are in what seems to be a strenuous situation. BUT you did a real nice job with the coloring and shading. The design of that dildo is awesome - it has a great curve. Good luck with work situation - it's tough to devote time to art when you're tired from your work / daily activities... May I recommend an energy drink? Heh. 
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| Fri Mar 21, 2014 7:22 am |
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ubermonkey
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Thanks for commenting Hoyeru and Fogbank!
Yeah as Hoyeru points out I think I got a little carried away with the text. That elbow, I had added it in and for some reason it just looked wrong, so I ended up turning it off. I had also wanted to do another revision of Lily's hands and possibly her expression, but in the end I decided to use the time I had to finish up...I used to never finish pics and I've been trying to be better about pushing through to the end even if I'm not 100% satisfied.
The text lite version:
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| Fri Mar 21, 2014 10:03 am |
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wow, just wow.
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| Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:22 pm |
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ubermonkey
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Thanks twisteddarkness!
Been in a funk and havn't drawn in a week! Forced myself to draw this morning, even though it was just a quick half hour layout for a tentacle loli pic.
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| Wed Mar 26, 2014 3:44 pm |
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| Sat Mar 29, 2014 5:36 pm |
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ubermonkey
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Thanks Risa! I'm working through it, mostly just exhaustion from being pulled in too many directions at once by work and life, so no worries!
The final part in the tentacle pic finished up.
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| Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:42 pm |
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very nice. well worth the wait.
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| Mon Mar 31, 2014 7:38 pm |
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I had to follow you over here to make sure I wasn't missing anything from you..lol.
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| Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:49 pm |
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ubermonkey
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LOL, unfortunatly I've been in a bit of a life is crazy and stealing all my time slump. That should be fixed soon. I have a pic that is inked(stacy and the pony) that will be colored soon, and I have two (or more) pics coming in the it runs in the family series. There is a little bit of new stuff, on my tumblr, but it is an adult woman with different dogs if anyone is into that kind of thing.
http://www.tumblr.com/blog/ubermonkeyworld
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| Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:23 am |
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I am going to be starting an loli orgy pic as a thank you to all those following and commenting on my art. I'm approaching 500 watchers on Hentai Foundry, but I'm only asking those who check me out here, at lolicit, and on my tumblr to contribute suggestions. If you have a character you'd like to see included in the orgy or a tag(tentacles, futa, dp, cum swapping, etc) that you'd like to see included in the orgy feel free to send it to me anyway you like, post here, send a pm, send an email to idrawthemnude99@yahoo.com, etc. As long s it doesn't get too overwhelming I will try to include every suggestion. I think right now the only things that are off limits are gore and scat.
I'm also open to a setting for the orgy if anyone has suggestions for that. This idea is just forming so I haven't locked anything down yet.
Also working on finishing the pic of Staci with the pony, got lines finished and working on colors now.
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| Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:55 pm |
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Color nude version. One with clothing coming soon as well.
Staci visits the farm of a family relative and ends up playing with a pony when everyone else is too busy to pay attention to her. Shes such a friendly girl, and curious too. She is surprised and delighted when she finds out the pony is just as friendly as some of the men she knows, and likes the same trick she does with her tongue.
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| Wed Apr 23, 2014 2:25 pm |
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Girl + Pony = hawt. sweet pic and looking forward to the orgy pic you mentioned Ubermonkey
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| Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:30 pm |
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Thanks! Now the clothed version, which some viewers have pointed out(and I agree) works better overall.
there is still room for more suggestions for characters and ideas for the orgy scene if anyone wants to see something specific in it.
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| Fri Apr 25, 2014 9:16 pm |
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