Mine Art (My first try)

This is my first try at any type of serious nude drawing. I hope it is enjoyed and plz be honest with your criticism!

As a side note, some of the pictures are there twice for a purpose. My scanner made some of them too light so I increased the contrast, plz let me know which ones you like the best.

Edit: Wow, the resolution makes it look kinda funky... I wonder if I can fix that...

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Not bad, not bad! Seems you have outlining down. That's the hardest part for me. With some shading or color, they'd look even better, but you get a thumbs up from this novice lol.

Hello, I find that the line art in your first post is different than in the second...

Keep going anyways It doesn't look bad in any case Smile

Yes, I think the first post has different art style. I prefer the second post art style btw.

I think the hands on third picture of second post is a bit weird, but for a begginer, you draw very well!

Not a bad start at all. I would, how ever, suggest studying the "construction" of the human form (body, muscle, fat) to make your drawings feel more realistic and lifelike, or just get them in proper proportion =)

For example, the last pic, the breast are much too high, the arms and legs are not proportional to each other, (the ones on the left side of the pic seem skinnier yet the arm should be closer to the foreground given that she is twisting her body)

Don't feel like I'm being mean, I tell everyone to practice the human form more =) You're off to a great start, it just needs some polishing. If you need any help figuring out what to study I'll be more than happy to help.

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