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mshark190
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thx guys

like i said i dont really like the second one but i still think it is better than the original pic i posted...

anyways i just love how the first one turned out... hoping it wasnt a fluke... im working on one that is nude atm Razz

Edit: inking right now i should have it posted in about 15 minutes

Ok here it is... i messed up in the inking process three times :/ on her right knee, her right pussy lip and her left forearm... bleh i still think it looks pretty good so Very Happy

again, any feedback is greatly appreciated

Edit: her right big toe looks retarded also



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Thu Jan 29, 2009 4:20 am Profile PM MSN
feather
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please stop double posting. Go for the edit button instead of the reply button.

*looks at the last post* her legs are a bit too short. There's an issue with the way you draw shoulders. and it's done in pen --- do you rough it out in pencil before finishing it in pen? that would greatly improve your results.


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mshark190
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sorry about the double posting! won't happen anymore

as for the pen bit... yeah i draw it in pencil and then ink it... i inked this one WAY to fast... i didn't give it enough attention... anyways, i can see what you mean about the shoulders... her arms look like rubber... umm i feel like her nipple bellybutton pussy setup looks really bad... anyone else see that or am i overanylizing my own work?

Edit: ok... since no one is commenting on my stuff anymore, ill attach the new stuff into this post...

anyways i made three new ones... i tried my hand at different poses, they are all from my head so they look off.... the first one, i realized after i inked it, needs her left knee to be raised a bit in order to correct the perspective... the second one, the body looks a little small, it may just be the angle, and the third one, i dont even know what i was thinking it just looks so weird but... whatever Razz

any other suggestions?

Thu Jan 29, 2009 5:38 am Profile PM MSN
catboy_j
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It's not that no ones commenting nya. Fogbank is the only one to get more then 1 comment or even any whenever he posts lol, and even if he doesn't post artwork nya. Just give it time and keep working on improvement.

Your want to do poses is impressive but they're back to comming out blocky again, I believe that's how it was put earlier, but it's a bit more present here nya.


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mshark190
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i can see that Razz like i said, the good ones were copies and these ones were straight out of my head... i just got photoshop so I'm playing around with it a bit... I'm going to color one pic in and see how it comes out... then I'll work on some more drawings Razz

ill keep you posted Very Happy

Fri Jan 30, 2009 3:07 pm Profile PM MSN
ABC-Lolie
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Hi Mshark! Feather Kawaii 2

I find your drawings... so cute ._.
Keep drawing and posting because I believe you are going to improve fast. Wink

Btw, the loli 7 has legs way too short...

Sat Jan 31, 2009 5:41 pm Profile PM
mshark190
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thanks for the feedback ABC-Lolie Very Happy

i have looked at your stuff, you are really good Smile hopefully i can improve enough to be as good as you some day...

anyways like i said, i am playing around with photoshop and it takes a LONG time lol... i think that it looks really good, but i dont have the time to keep coloring my things in... so i should have that one pic colored in today, and then ill go back to practicing my drawing Very Happy

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Purplebootz
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She's vuuuury koot! I agree that you can see the improvements already. Keep it up Feather Kawaii 2

*grumbles about not being able to draw ><*

Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:30 pm Profile PM
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