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I don't mind your offering at all, but understand that these are just roughs. After I have them roughed out, I'll do them again, and it should look something more like this. (I hope)
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Sat Jul 14, 2007 4:41 am |
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feather: I don't mind your offering at all, but understand that these are just roughs. After I have them roughed out, I'll do them again, and it should look something more like this. (I hope)
Oh wow. THAT I can NOT do on Photoshop. ^_^; Maa, suki shirou. I'll just wait for your releases.
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kouhei
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Though I am not a big fan of PPG by any stretch, I am glad you are continuing to develop your skills feather. I can see us reading your published work one day. Personally, i do far more prefer your loli strip, but that has more to do with content then anything else.
Keep up the excellent work
ja ne,
l8r Kay?
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Tue Sep 25, 2007 1:08 pm |
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feather
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SQUEEEEEEE!
Anyway . . .
I swear I have this on my list of things to do.
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Tue Sep 25, 2007 6:22 pm |
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feather
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Okay, I rescanned all the pages I've done so far, because all the others were done on my All-in-One printer/scanner/copier, which, needless to say, sucked cum-dripping, hairy donkey balls. I'll have new pages up soon, too. Oh, any dialog added to the previous scans that's not present on these IS there. I just don't have the time to re-add it.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:41 am |
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feather
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And up to page 9.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 3:48 am |
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feather
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Since Page 10 doesn't contain any essential plot information (it just transitions from anal to vaginal sex), so here's 11 and 12.
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 6:35 pm |
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Just cause I am curious, do you have plans to take the roughs to a final copy at some point? The rough sketching is good, but I want to see these ideas turn into your usual high quality finished results . (Did I just say taht bouta PPG dojin? o.O ... I must be coming down with something)
Nice to see you continuing to update it though
ja ne,
l8r Kay?
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 8:06 pm |
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feather
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Yeah, I'll eventually finish it out. Probably. Most likely.
>.> and it's an h-doujin; the point isn't exactly the PPGZs, it's the lolis. ;D
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Wed Sep 26, 2007 10:22 pm |
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kouhei
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feather: Yeah, I'll eventually finish it out. Probably. Most likely.
Good
feather: >.> and it's an h-doujin; the point isn't exactly the PPGZs, it's the lolis. ;D
I got that, why do you think I want to see a finished copy?
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Because it's great.
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It's better than great it's brimming with Sunshine Power.
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And overflowing with Super Sexy Star Power!!!!!
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Negima-san
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From what I can observe, there is an evidence of rushwork here, and possibly your hands were sweating and unstable. You can draw well, but you seem to present it on notebook paper rather than on proper art paper. I recommend if you would try to train yourself with the art of a pen, rather than the pencil alone. Try rescanning your work, then shade it with a dark pen.
My advice is also not to masturbate while looking at your own artwork, as it would tend to stop you from progressing. Finish what you started, upload it, then do as you please. And I am not assuming you do masturbate while at it, it's just a general point of view.
And I have to point out the extra lines. They ruin the picture and do not give you justice. Try taking your time to erase the lines DIGITALLY on computer.
Drawing manga requires patience, and you have to sit down and perfect each page with loving care, not scan and send a half finished work just to meet a deadline. Take your time, were' not going anywhere.
overall I see potential, and I hope to see you draw better in the future.
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:23 am |
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feather
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LOL
You do realize this is a rough? See the word "rough" in the title? See us talking about whether I will finish it out or not? Pay attention.
If you want to see me draw better, you can do it now; have a look at my other projects.
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