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My Little Yuri Manga "Girl's Club"Updated 1/25/16 |
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I don't come across many loli yuri mangas, so I decided to make my own. Here is four chapters of my Loli yuri, the first chapter is the only one that has been finalized (but may redo it with my tablet). Along with the rough draft of the second and third chapter, with the fourth chapter in progress.
I've gone through a lot of other hentai ideas that I threw away in the end. I started Girl's Club on lined paper, so just incase I decided to scrap this idea as well, I wouldn't waste any more of my good paper. But I've stuck with it and have been working on it for probably a year and a half at least. I don't get much time to work on it.... Enjoy.
NEW COLORED PAGES ARE BELOW
Final Chapter 1
Colored Cover- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=54819
Colored Pages 1 and 2- http://www.littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=25549
Colored Pages 3 and 4- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=54818
Colored Pages 5 and 6- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=54817
Pages 7 and 8- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=54816
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Rough Chapter 2 Beginning (To be colored)
Pages 1 and 2- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=52359
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Rough Chapter 2
Page 1- http://www.littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=39396
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Rough Chapter 3
Pages 1 and 2- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=53442
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Rough Chapter 4
Pages 1 and 2- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=75237
Pages 3 and 4- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=75514
Pages 5 and 6- http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=79803
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I studied some mangas I have so I could make mine look some what authentic. My inspiration of style is art from Shoujo-ryuu Koufuku Kakushuronfrom, the artists that did "Chemical Sisters" and others. Here's a link.
hxxp://sasamisa.co.uk/msrus/3-zosho/thumbs.php?lang=rom&title=0o-03.137.01
I would also like to link the mangas from Kanran Ogawa that helped me with a lot of angles and ideas for a yuri. They have the most yuri I've seen in a single series of loli, since it's not all yuri, you have to look around the galleries a little to find it. Their art style isn't as influential to me as Shoujo-ryuu Koufuku Kakushuronfrom, but they have one of the cutest art styles I've seen. In the first chapter there's some angles and ideas I took directly from other manga, but I changed them enough to make it my own of course, even attempting to improve upon their ideas and quality.
hxxp://sasamisa.co.uk/msrus/3-zosho/title1.php?lang=eng&letter=9&series=1&circle=496
I think I still need to work on hair and dialog. Tell me what ya think.
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Here's the rest.
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That's pretty hot. I can't wait to see the worked out version.
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I agree with you, it's incredibly hot, and it would be excellent in color
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Looks like a good start. I might suggest that you either vary the hair color or find a less similar hairstyle for one --- it's a little hard for me to distinguish between the two of them.
But on the whole it looks good.
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feather: Looks like a good start. I might suggest that you either vary the hair color or find a less similar hairstyle for one --- it's a little hard for me to distinguish between the two of them.
But on the whole it looks good.
Thanks! I do try to keep in mind how identical my characters look. It's hard keeping them looking different in the face, since the formula for a face in this style is so limited. My intention was to make one of them with darker hair. As for the hair styles, what can I say? I have a weakness for ponytails.
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akuma2002: I agree with you, it's incredibly hot, and it would be excellent in color agree its sweet nice and hot but whit some color it would be EXCELENT!!!
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Absofrickinlutely great
I can't wait to see your cleaned and colored version
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Here is six more pages, finishing up this chapter of the manga. I'm working on the cleaned up version of this rough draft, while continuing on with the story. I'm eventually attaching a colored beginning to this chapter as well.
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OMG...
you're soooooo goooooood....
*applause*
KEEP UP THE GOOD, NO, UBER EXCELLENTEH WORK! XD
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nice... do you plan to correct the lines, or just leave it like this?
I mean a cleanup...
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Mon May 14, 2007 10:58 am |
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Yimi: Here is six more pages, finishing up this chapter of the manga. I'm working on the cleaned up version of this rough draft, while continuing on with the story. I'm eventually attaching a colored beginning to this chapter as well.
Doesn't that answer you, Fragnostic?
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Sorry, I was rather interested in the manga than the posts -_-'
(If you end, maybe some color )
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Fragnostic: Sorry, I was rather interested in the manga than the posts -_-'
(If you end, maybe some color )
Heh, I'm not sure if I'd take the time to color every page, but what I've noticed in real manga is they do around four pages in color for the beginning, then continue in black and white. It's probably a money thing with real manga, or tradition to do it like that. So I plan to possibly do colored openings to each chapter, or only before the first chapter. This way I can have some color while making more progress on the story. Coloring takes awhile . I plan on having at least two more chapters, each chapter introducing another character.
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Ill say one thing: Great. I like your work.
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