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feather
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Not currently actively updaated but if you haven't read it the link is below.
>> lolistrip.lah.li <<
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Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:26 pm |
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Werweißschon
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To become a manga the pics must go from right to left.
Just kidding, looks good to me so far.
Panties?
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Sat Mar 03, 2007 9:30 pm |
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Electricus
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Yes, fine, panties.
Oh, and just a bit of critism feather: that last speech bubble is a bit small. Looking forward to the next installment.
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Sun Mar 04, 2007 1:09 pm |
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feather
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Yes, panties.
And I done adopted a technique in which the loudness of a bit of dialog is conveyed by the size of the text --- it's small because she's saying it softly.
Thank youse for the encouragement, youse guys.
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Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:08 pm |
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Nameless
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She kind of looks furry...
Anyway, I like it. Very nice.
I suppose you want to get into the web-comic/web-manga scene?
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Sun Mar 04, 2007 5:12 pm |
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Electricus
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Well? Feather likes furries.
feather: Yes, panties.
And I done adopted a technique in which the loudness of a bit of dialog is conveyed by the size of the text --- it's small because she's saying it softly.
Thank youse for the encouragement, youse guys. Yes, I get that, but you can't make it too small.
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Sun Mar 04, 2007 6:14 pm |
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feather
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Kamiki Takeshi Jurai: Yes, I get that, but you can't make it too small. I know. I choose the size very carefully, so that it was noticably small but still readable.
Nameless: She kind of looks furry... Who looks Furry? I haven't introduced my furry character yet . . .
Nameless: Anyway, I like it. Very nice.
I suppose you want to get into the web-comic/web-manga scene? More like practice. I need to practice placing images in panels, placing text, flow, text effects, drawing the same character repeatedly, humor, pacing, ect. This is a start.
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Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:06 pm |
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Nameless
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The loli character looks furry.
And practice, eh? Hmmm.
Well, good for you.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:10 am |
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feather
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. . . okay . . . She's not even nekomimi.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:19 am |
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Nameless
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Nekomimi is far from furry. She just looks it to me.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:33 am |
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feather
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Furry is just nekomimi with fur. But that discussion doesn't belong here.
There's absolutely nothing furry about her.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:26 am |
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Electricus
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She doesn't look that Furry to me.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 10:02 am |
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Nameless
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Hey, whatever. I just said she looked a bit furry is all. Sheesh.
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 11:57 am |
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kouhei
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I think it's a fantastic start. I look forward to more. Of note I will say I too prefer the right to left reading style. kinda caught me off guard for a moment I was trying to figure out what was going on lol then I realized it was left to right.
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l8r Kay?
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Sat Mar 10, 2007 6:48 am |
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Electricus
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You've been reading too much manga.
I remember when I first started an unflipped book. Several times I had to force myself not to read LtR. Nowdays it just happens naturally, but it was tricky at first.
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Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:04 am |
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