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shanyutetsuo
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Original title: ぼくらの露出ゲーム2

Genre: Lolicon, Adventure, RPG, Outdoor exposure, Ashamed, Masturbation, Sex toys

Language: Japanese

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Hey everyone!

I have translated this game to English!

Original untranslated version here:
http://lah.li/31106/our-exposure-game-2/?page=1

A few notes:
  • Be warned, I don't read/speak Japanese, so I had the help of Google translate to get the gist, and then re-wrote the story as I saw fit. Some things came through as complete nonsense, so I just sorta made up something that made sense.
  • I freely admit I've not done hardly any erotic literature, so it might not be amazing writing. PLEASE offer suggestions on how to improve the writing, and I'll be happy to put it in and post it again.
  • There are probably bugs. I've not heavily tested this. Let me know if you find issues, and I'll see about fixing them.
  • I probably missed some areas as well. There was a ton to translate. Again, if you find an area I missed (or it has nonsense English because I missed going back over it) let me know, and I'll get it sorted.

I'm still looking for help for getting this decensored! If anyone knows anyone that wants to try it, let me know! I think it would be great to get! Otherwise I'm going to try my hand at Photoshop (I'm not so bad, just slow).

I've made a PC version and a Mac version. You only need to download the one you want to play, they are both the same otherwise. If anyone wants a Linux version, let me know, I can make that happen.

Enjoy!

Shanyu

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Wed Jan 03, 2018 7:16 am Profile PM
masterofpuppets13
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Thanks for the translation. Not speaking Japanese I have no idea how close you are to the actual storyline, but I think you did a great job! These games are so much better when there's a story line to follow. Thanks for the hard work and time!!


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Fri Jan 05, 2018 1:50 pm Profile PM
ac123
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Appreciate it man, it's so much better to understand whats going on

Fri Jan 05, 2018 7:08 pm Profile PM
Krosh
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Greetings, happy new year and a huge THANKS for this translation. I love exhibitionism games and that it is loli makes it even more awesome and i had hoped that this would get a translation. So thank you very much for your efforts.

But there are a few errors that your version has.
First: the masturbating girl on the right of the playground is invisible most of the time.
Second: most of the CG are somewhat shown wrong. i mean it shows just a upper left portion of the CG so right und lower parts are often missing.
Third: upon entering her home after finishing all her tasks it shows an error message that people8.png is missing. (i worked around this by copying
people7.png and renaming it to people8.png)
fourth: by accessing the CGs in the CG room the game gets unresponsive, so you cant exit the CG or anything else.

Thats the worst parts but there are a few scenes where the text isn't really suitable to the situation and could use some correction, but that is for later and i will gladly help you with it after the first errors are fixed. :]

So thank you again and good luck. Very Happy

Sat Jan 06, 2018 4:03 pm Profile PM
shanyutetsuo
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Krosh, what platform did you run this on, Mac or PC?

I'll look into these items and get back to you. The people8.png is simple enough to fix.

Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:32 pm Profile PM
shanyutetsuo
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I think I found the issue with the masturbating girl, as well as the people8.png thing.

I've not seen any issues with the CGs showing incorrectly in the normal play of the game. Are you talking about the CG area in the house? If so I'll have to take a look there and see if I see something wacky going on.

Mon Jan 08, 2018 5:42 pm Profile PM
shanyutetsuo
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I fixed the people image and the masturbating girl. I was not able to see any problems with the CGs, they worked fine for me. Reuploaded latest.

Tue Jan 09, 2018 7:34 am Profile PM
Krosh
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Hi shanyutetsuo,

i play on pc masterrace of course Very Happy
but i will give you two screenshots what it looks like for me.

And thats how actually almost every CG looks like (always some part missing) even the CG from the end game gallery.


jap original works fine.

update on the fourth point: when accessing the gallery and game gets unresponsive... my fault :[ i tried to get the next CG with the buttons of the keyboard (enter etc.) which was futile because all i had to do was a click with the mouse -_-. So ignore that...

If you fix that CG size than that would be it.

Tue Jan 09, 2018 8:54 pm Profile PM
shanyutetsuo
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Hey Krosh,

Those screenshots really helped. I've sorted that out now and re-upped.

Enjoy!

Wed Jan 10, 2018 4:16 am Profile PM
Krosh
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I see you also updated some of the scenes that were a bit odd translated but now they are very good and suitable.
Excellent job on this. Now it is a great translated loli exhibitionism game! There should be more games like this!

Sadly the exposure progression was a bit flawed, so she could get naked much to early with 7 points. Getting naked should be coming last in the order.
I would have liked it much more expanded, so after going pantyless, she goes topless, then goes bottomless before going naked.
But thats just nagging on a high level^^

Fri Jan 12, 2018 8:47 pm Profile PM
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