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vash98
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hey folks welcome to the asylum im just gonna post my artwork so please comment and let me know how it looks an artist only grows when they know how
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Thu Jun 29, 2017 6:53 am |
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Hi Vash98,
I see that your art leans to the 3D side of things. Cool. I’m afraid that I don’t know what base figures come with the art program that you’re using so I’m a poor judge of how much you had to do to make these characters. I like the lighting and poses. The girl who just got out of the shower should probably have curtains on her bedroom window. Nice background outside though. The cat girl is very purple-themed, isn’t she? She looks in good shape but I have a quibble about her tail – it doesn’t look fuzzy at all. It also is black – just the same color as the metal bed frame so the tail looks like iron to me. I like the curve of the tail. Other recommendations - add a bit of a shine to the metal frame, similar to the shine on her boot heels. The color of the bed appeals to me. I look forward to seeing what else you’ve done.
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Sat Jul 01, 2017 3:33 am |
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thanks the program i use is DAZ studio and paint shop pro for post work
i tried the curtains it just didnt work with the look ty
yeah the tail is purple its a texture set i made of a royal leopard theme ty
next bathch is coming now
i tend to use Aiko 3.0 as much as possible she just looks more natural and the skin textures look better and she poses well
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Sat Jul 01, 2017 6:23 am |
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Fogbank
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Hi Vash98,
So you like pinups with elf girls? Weirdo. Nah, elves are cool and beautiful elf girls are definitely worthy of pictures. I take as many as I can when I see them! Nice job with the “beach front” picture – I like her pose and I note that the swimsuit matches the bright red truck behind her. I like the picture of the girl at the stripper pole, her pose is sexy and her expression is appealing. I wish that you added some shine to her long gloves similar to what you have on her boots, though. As it is, her arms disappear into the black background which is a little off-putting to me. I don’t know what to say about the next creepy picture other than the beholder is quite ominous. It seems to me that his eye stalks should be more ropey rather than rigid; they look a bit like nails as they are. Still, it’s creepy – I wouldn’t want to be the unfortunate girl in the picture. The last one looks like part of a girl’s leg in shallow water and its reflection. Looks good but I want to move the camera over 5 feet so I can see the rest of the girl! Heh. Thanks for sharing.
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Thu Jul 13, 2017 7:17 am |
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vash98
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thanx i grew up on a navy base so i love the pinup style
the stripper picture was based on a one where a milf is forced to strip while her husband finds a job i didnt care for the mag as a whole but the cover was inspiring for the picture
ty for the comments of the beholder picture i did it for a helloween contest its been to be dark completely and ominus unfortunately its a prop and the eyes dont move well
the last one although a girl is meant to be an iceberg its kinda a visual trick ty
heres the next batch for ya fogbank
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Fri Jul 14, 2017 6:20 am |
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Hi Vash98,
I like the pose of the girl on the motorbike. Very inviting – giving the viewer a tough choice “which one do you want to ride first?” I like her expression and how you added a tattoo on her arm. Captain UK is showing us that she’s in great shape as she flies into the sky. Her dynamic pose and outfit work well and manage to hold interest despite the great background of skyscrapers in the evening. Last but not least, Clair the succubus has fantastic wings! She looks cute but wow – those wings are really something. It looks like she should have a more dynamic outfit (maybe showing her belly) to balance a bit better. Keep at it.
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Sun Jul 16, 2017 11:49 pm |
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vash98
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thanx i actually designed clair as a D&D character for a monsters game i was involved in it was fun but short lived the DM wasnt into it
on for the next batches
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Mon Jul 17, 2017 7:29 am |
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vash98
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next batch
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Tue Jul 18, 2017 5:52 am |
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Hello vash98, I see that you posted a bunch of pictures this time. I like American Dream – the color of her outfit goes well with the American Flag background. Caged Desires has too much cage… The concept of Strike Witch Neko-girl is cool but I think she could have looked better against the sky either above or below the airplane. As it is, she blends in, which is a pity considering her perky posterior. Also the tail would be blowing back if she was zipping along at the same speed as the airplane. In Dragon Goddess, I wouldn’t have seen the dragons if you didn’t mention it. Her elaborate outfit with the fireworks in the background attracts all the attention – I hardly register the woman at all and the dragons on her hat and in her hand? Nope. The heroine Fireball is hot, I like her outfit and the way she shows it off.
Moving on to the next batch, thumbs up on Drow Magic. I like the composition and the coloring and the stars are great. Christmas girl is good and l like the Christmas tree background. No comment on Mistress and Slave. I’m glad to see the Drow Witch appear again in Dark Gift, I like the way she looks with her magic spell taking shape. The ivy-covered background works well too and makes it an effective picture. I have a feeling the D&D adventurer meeting her here is in for a painful experience…
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Tue Jul 25, 2017 7:33 am |
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thanx i usually follow my inspiration to its conclusion
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Thu Jul 27, 2017 7:45 am |
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sorry i took so long i been busy with work and moving it slows up my artwork
anyway heres the next batch
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Sat Aug 05, 2017 5:52 am |
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The Xmas pin-up has an effective design but all the colors are washed out; it doesn’t feel very festive. Gwen’s leotard is a lovely shade of blue. Lady Death works well when set against her red cape but her upper arms totally disappear against the black background which is unfortunate. I appreciate the pose of the purple-haired elf against the evening sky. Her white outfit shows her body off well. Now we come to my favorite picture of the group – the car hop girl sitting on a hot car in the evening. I like her pose and how none of it is hidden by blending in the background. The GT500 auto is hot and so is the girl. I like the wallpaper in “Sexy Spell” and the Victorian outfit is displayed to good effect by the busty woman with the mysterious smile.
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Mon Aug 07, 2017 7:12 am |
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vash98
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thanks and now for my newest piece
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Tue Aug 08, 2017 5:02 am |
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This witch is a sharp dresser! I like her embroidered robe. Her magical ball of dark energy looks like it's going to be a pain for some unlucky intruder.
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Sat Aug 19, 2017 7:42 pm |
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ty lol thats the plan
speaking of witches here is a challenge piece i did
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Mon Aug 21, 2017 5:43 am |
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