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Cherche
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It's been a while since I last posted. Did my art improve? What can I improve on?

Fri Jun 19, 2015 5:34 pm Profile PM
IxFa
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It does look like you've improved, I like what I'm seeing here.
As for headsize, that's rather subjective. Some artists do larger heads than others, it's really a stylistic choice with these anime-type pictures.
I'm not too sure how best to improve upon this.

These pictures aren't terribly complicated, they're neutral poses with nothing going on, and they're just sketches. To really see where your weaknesses lie, it's probably best to do something like varied poses, scenes, or other such things.

Where you say the face seems off - I don't think so, however the hands don't look well.

Trying to do my best to give you good feedback. Keep drawing!


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Thanks so much! I'm glad you see progress in my art! And you commented so quickly too! I do have some poses of characters I've made, but whenenever I draw a character in a pose, I use references from other artwork and it is difficult to apply it with my own proportions. For ex. If I wanted to draw a girl sitting down with a book, I search for poses, and it is actually a guy sitting down instead, so I have to apply my knowledge of my characters proportions to the pose I found. I can't quite figure out how to do this accurately. I can draw things I see almost perfectly,without tracing, and it would roughly look the same, but I can't seem to figure out how to use what I see to make my own creations. Right now I'm focusing on getting my proportions down. Front view shows the full face of a character, and is something that would help when I eventually draw more characters different poses, so I have tried perfecting it. Do you know any drills I can preform so I can ingrain drawing characters dynamically? When I do draw poses, they are vert static. I'll upload as much as I can, if you can, please tell me if I'm going in the right direction.



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Fri Jun 19, 2015 11:52 pm Profile PM
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I love art, I appreciate the skill, but I'm not an artist.
I can point out what may be wrong in the end result, but I can't help you reach a result.
I can judge, but I can't guide.

Wish I could do more, but generally the rule of thumb is to draw a lot and maybe look at other people drawing. Videos and tutorials exist.
All up to you, I don't know how best to go about that.

Also try not to quote an entire post, especially if it's the immediately previous one. Quote the individual part you want to remark on, or don't quote at all(As is generally the right choice if there are no other posts between your reply and the post you're replying to)


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lol sorry, fixed it.

Here's some of my poses. I wasn't paying too much on adding clothes/hair, just trying to pose in various ways. Im developing a game, and was trying to make some battle artwork.

Sat Jun 20, 2015 1:06 am Profile PM
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Yandere chan! You don't wanna make here angry. Lol.
Working on expressions now.

Sat Jun 20, 2015 1:20 am Profile PM
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The lone faces you did are well done, good job. The scythe girl has a real odd hand, and the scythe is very.. crescent in the pole. Curves much too far.
The boy's shield looks odd, like it's too close to his body. Should probably be further away from his torso, or larger. Otherwise make his elbow show up.

Good pictures beside that. Help me though: I'd prefer your future pictures be turned so they aren't vertical. I have to bend my head to get a proper look.


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Thanks for the feedback! It means allot.
Did a sitting pose. The fingers and toes don't seem right...What would you give it in a 1 out of ten?

Sun Jun 21, 2015 8:31 pm Profile PM
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I like them. I wish I could draw as well. Keep practicing.


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Sun Jun 21, 2015 8:47 pm Profile PM
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Out of ten?
Its' hard, because I need some kind of comparison to scale to.

The eyes are flat on top, making her look tired. You got the hands and feet pretty well this time.
Her legs are bending a tad awkwardly below the knees, especially the left leg(Her left). Legs definitely do not bend that way. There is a solid unbending bone there, so that needs a little attention.

You seem to have her shoulders and collarbone correct.
I have a personal preference for longer hair, but you did her hair well for what it is.

So let's see... Maybe... 8/10 as far as your art goes? It's high-tier of what you've shown, but with the bent leg that really sticks out so it can't be perfect.
And it's just not fair to scale it against other artists who do lots of colouring and shading. #/10 system just isn't good for helping you improve, it's either far too vague, far too subjective, or just unfair.


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Oh, mybad, i meant how much better is it to what ive done before. Didn't really look through to what I was typing.

Mon Jun 22, 2015 11:04 pm Profile PM
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The desire and drive to improve is what's key here.
I can't tell too much how you're improving. Just draw more, I'll try to help point out what's not right


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After hours of drawing and thinking I came up with this. Id safely say it's the drawing I put my most effort in. This is concept art for a 3d model im making for my game. For a 3d roaming loli adventure rpg. I plan on doing side view and back view also. I know the line quality isnt smooth, and the shading seems like a weak attempt.. Tell me what you guys think?

Fri Jul 03, 2015 5:49 am Profile PM
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Well done. The face and torso look very nice, the limbs more like sketches
Her right hand is nicely done, her left is rough and sharp

Seems to be shaded well enough and coloured nicely.

I like what you did, though I'd prefer long hair, personally.


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Thanks again IxFa! When you made that post on coloring and shading, I tried to step up my game. Oh yea, I noticed on all my drawing I draw with short hair, lol. Do you have any idea's for what I should draw next? My imagination is only limited to basic poses.

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