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Azr!3nn3
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Hello again. After many years I finally post here again.

I was only starting to draw at the time and have been practicing for a while.

here is the original:
http://lah.li/8322/first-time/?page=1

I have redrawn and improved it. Enjoy

Sat Nov 30, 2013 5:47 pm Profile PM
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Welcome back! Yes, you have improved!
Can you show us some of your recent works too? Feather Neko 2


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Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:51 pm Profile PM WWW Skype
Azr!3nn3
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Thanks.

I don't have any that I would like to pist here, but I will be drawing a couple more.
So watch this space.

Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:40 pm Profile PM
ubermonkey
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Looking nice, there is a bunch of improvement over the originals.

A few things to keep an eye on as you continue: Proportions, her legs seem a bit short. A quick eyeball to see that the legs are roughly half the body length during the sketching phase helps catch that, for me anyway. Also shoulders are wider than hips in your pic,(I have this happen a lot in my art and I'm always having to go back and fix it). Last the torso is looking a bit blocky, even for the loli frame there should be a little narrowing at the waist and flaring of hte hips, just less pronounced than in adult women. All three of these pop up in my own artwork, so I thought I'd share, I find that being aware of these things is the first step to catching and fixing before the final version.

Keep drawing and definitely share them!

Mon Dec 02, 2013 4:03 am Profile PM
Azr!3nn3
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I am grateful for your feedback and crit. Thank you very much.

Hmmm, I usually figure the leg length out correctly- I the distance between the knee and the hip is equal to the distance bewteen the hip and colar bone (like when girls fold themselves in half to do their toenails Feather Kawaii 2) Guess I missed it this time.
Thanks for tip on the shoulders. Ill keep that in mind. Waist as well. Will be posting soon. Thanks.

Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:19 pm Profile PM
Torakun
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Looks good man Very Happy Looking forward to see more.


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Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:35 pm Profile PM
Azr!3nn3
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A new piece.



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Mon Dec 09, 2013 12:34 am Profile PM
lupf2112
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Wow, that's beautifully drawn and colored, and really hot. Also, great choice for the background color, it adds a really 'warm' contrast.

Mon Dec 09, 2013 2:32 am Profile PM
Azr!3nn3
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Thanks alot. I appreciate it.

Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:00 am Profile PM
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Much growth in the absence. Good works in here. Feather Neko 2


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Mon Dec 09, 2013 1:00 pm Profile PM
Azr!3nn3
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Thank you

Mon Dec 09, 2013 7:44 pm Profile PM
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A work in progress.



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Mon Mar 31, 2014 12:33 pm Profile PM
Azr!3nn3
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Completed



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Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:14 pm Profile PM
Hdash
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Looks pretty good! You've improved a lot in the last few months. Keep it up!

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Azr!3nn3
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Thanks for the feedback.

Heres another I completed.

Wed Apr 09, 2014 10:37 am Profile PM
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