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Azr!3nn3
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Hello again. After many years I finally post here again.
I was only starting to draw at the time and have been practicing for a while.
here is the original:
http://lah.li/8322/first-time/?page=1
I have redrawn and improved it. Enjoy
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Welcome back! Yes, you have improved!
Can you show us some of your recent works too?
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Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:51 pm |
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Thanks.
I don't have any that I would like to pist here, but I will be drawing a couple more.
So watch this space.
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Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:40 pm |
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Looking nice, there is a bunch of improvement over the originals.
A few things to keep an eye on as you continue: Proportions, her legs seem a bit short. A quick eyeball to see that the legs are roughly half the body length during the sketching phase helps catch that, for me anyway. Also shoulders are wider than hips in your pic,(I have this happen a lot in my art and I'm always having to go back and fix it). Last the torso is looking a bit blocky, even for the loli frame there should be a little narrowing at the waist and flaring of hte hips, just less pronounced than in adult women. All three of these pop up in my own artwork, so I thought I'd share, I find that being aware of these things is the first step to catching and fixing before the final version.
Keep drawing and definitely share them!
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 4:03 am |
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I am grateful for your feedback and crit. Thank you very much.
Hmmm, I usually figure the leg length out correctly- I the distance between the knee and the hip is equal to the distance bewteen the hip and colar bone (like when girls fold themselves in half to do their toenails ) Guess I missed it this time.
Thanks for tip on the shoulders. Ill keep that in mind. Waist as well. Will be posting soon. Thanks.
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Tue Dec 03, 2013 4:19 pm |
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Looks good man Looking forward to see more.
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Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:35 pm |
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A new piece.
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Wow, that's beautifully drawn and colored, and really hot. Also, great choice for the background color, it adds a really 'warm' contrast.
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 2:32 am |
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Thanks alot. I appreciate it.
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Much growth in the absence. Good works in here.
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 1:00 pm |
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Thank you
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Mon Dec 09, 2013 7:44 pm |
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A work in progress.
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Completed
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Looks pretty good! You've improved a lot in the last few months. Keep it up!
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Tue Apr 08, 2014 3:57 pm |
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Thanks for the feedback.
Heres another I completed.
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