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hoyeru
Silver Angel
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Bah, Disney, let's just not tell them! How would they learn??


Thank you for the feedback, Hoyeru.
Are you sure I need to post some PNG files? Those are quite heavy, and the JPG quality look fine to me. However, maybe you're right about the format, it wasn't very convenient.

Well, you don't need to do anything, just like you don't need to do this art but you do it anyway. Just post the files if you want to, hehe. Maybe you can upload a rar of higher quality ver on rapidshare and a jpg ver here. I'd like to have a higher version of most comics I get and your work is so good that I'd like it in good quality.
Now, I think the story line in 2 went too far too fast but thats just me. Maybe you shoulda had the cherry popping in another episode. Now the only thing left for them to do a big orgy!
Now you can do a nice teasing episode where the little minx are on the beach teasing the men there by doing handstands and various spreads and looking if somebody is carefully observing them and quietly commenting to each other with whispers about all the various penises and breasts of the adults they see and maybe wondering what the breasts of the women would feel to foundle and suck on, all the while playing with each other. Just an idea there. It doesnt have to be sex sex all the time. Teasing is actually better.

One thing I don't like is the hair IMO, it should look more silky, maybe it's the way you want it to look. Hair is hard to draw anyway you kinda make it to look like hay. Maybe doing it digitally is hader than doing it with a brush.
Another thing is the nostrils you draw, you should only put them in in a close up, otherwise they are not needed and make them brown as the body outline not black. And they are curved you know, just like on page 12, 1st panel.

Your art has always been a hit on 4chan/b, seen the new stuff there already, people saying it's the best thing they've seen all day, hehe. People want MOAR! Keep up the fantastic work.


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Sun Jun 02, 2013 4:53 pm Profile PM
some_other_guy
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Oh god that is GORGEOUS art!!!

And welcome back!

Sun Jun 02, 2013 6:41 pm Profile PM
play_nice_69
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excellent ... thank you ....

Mon Jun 03, 2013 2:32 am Profile PM
Netreek
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Please continue. Smile Awesome. Smile

Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:40 am Profile PM
bobbie2b
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A masterful piece of work.... magnificent.... sensuous.... erotic.... thank you for your providing us with hours of pleasure

Mon Jun 03, 2013 1:25 pm Profile PM
dem0dem0
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Thank you for this fine work. You have made me very happy with your work. I hope it continues. Thank you!

Tue Jun 04, 2013 2:49 pm Profile PM
fire.riseing
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This is excellent i love the art work and the story and i cant wait for more to come.

Thank you

Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:06 pm Profile PM
TheCollect0r
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BTW, nudists haven't been "nudists" for a while now because the name carries negative connotations you know... They prefer to call themselves "naturalists" now.

Fantastic work, your strength lies in the very natural SNICKER Laughing way you draw bodies.

Wed Jun 05, 2013 12:57 am Profile PM
JoJo187
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BTW, nudists haven't been "nudists" for a while now because the name carries negative connotations you know... They prefer to call themselves "naturalists" now.

First, it is naturist. A naturalist is someone who enjoys nature., usually the study of it. Second, the terms nudist and naturist are synonymous and will be used by different people. In general, nudism is living without clothes while naturism is more about being naked in open spaces. However, in Europe, the English term naturist is preferred (when translated into English where appropriate).

For Tonkato, you are superb! I have enjoyed all of your stories and hope you can keep up the creativity. I wish i had your artistic talent.

Joey

Wed Jun 05, 2013 5:36 am Profile PM
andycarpenter
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Thanks for sharing! This was well worth the wait.

Wed Jun 05, 2013 7:06 pm Profile PM
IZOD
Beginner Angel
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outstanding well worth the wait Thank you

Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:44 pm Profile PM
Tonkato
LAH Artist
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andreamedis:
I agree with elec. Disney's not afraid to sue. Beware the mouse and all he owns.
Honestly, if a Disney executive happens to see this, I don't think the first thing to come to his mind would be "Oh my god, this is copyright infringement, let's sue the author's ass." Razz Besides, this is only a short quote frome a movie and I think it's legal even under non-lolicon circomstances.
hoyeru:
Your art has always been a hit on 4chan/b, seen the new stuff there already, people saying it's the best thing they've seen all day, hehe. People want MOAR! Keep up the fantastic work.
Thank you for the comment, Hoyeru. Too bad I missed the discussion on /b, but I don't spontaneously come to that place.
And thanks for the useful advices. You're right about the hair, I wasn't 100% satisfied with it, but the way I came up with it has one big value: it's quick! Detailing the hair with long, soft brush strokes like I did with Penny/Martine's adventures would have been too long and I don't have a lot of free time to draw lolicon comics.
TheCollect0r:
Fantastic work, your strength lies in the very natural SNICKER Laughing way you draw bodies.
My English is not that good, I'm afrait I didn't get your pun (it's a pun, isn't it?) Smile

@some_other_guy, play_nice_69, Netreek, bobbie2b, dem0dem0, fire.riseing, JoJo187, andycarpenter, IZOD: THANK YOU!

Thu Jun 06, 2013 6:04 pm Profile PM
darcsied
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Tonkato, maybe you can figure a way for Lizzie's mom to join in the fun? Very Happy

Thu Jun 06, 2013 11:50 pm Profile PM
TheCollect0r
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TheCollect0r wrote:

Fantastic work, your strength lies in the very natural SNICKER Laughing way you draw bodies.


My English is not that good, I'm afrait I didn't get your pun (it's a pun, isn't it?) Smile


You know, "nudist" and "naturalist" are synonyms. And your bodies look very natural the way you draw them.

Fri Jun 07, 2013 1:33 am Profile PM
Electricus
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I think the word you intended to use is naturist. Naturalist is similar but with a different meaning.

Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:15 am Profile PM
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