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[Cobaltex] Harumi's Bad Play [30cd4759]
How good are the subs I made for this
excellent
 38%  [ 15 ]
good
 35%  [ 14 ]
average
 12%  [ 5 ]
poor
 5%  [ 2 ]
bad
 7%  [ 3 ]
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cobaltex
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I didn't like how the official eng srt subs looked and how they were riddled with grammatical errors, so I decided to remake them completely. first I stylized them then I re-timed them and then I went through and fixed all the grammer and spelling mistakes.

For this release I include both the original srt sub track and my re-done ass sub track (my tracks the default).
as the poll should indicate I'm looking for your opinions about my sub's, anything you think I should fix, or I could improve upon, and if there's enough that needs fixing/improvement I may come out with a v2.

hxxp://www.sendspace.com/file/e56ym4

Note if enough users want it I'll create a torrent file as well, but it will be the uncompressed video instead of the compressed version.

Wed May 16, 2012 8:44 pm Profile PM
Doki
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cobaltex:
...I'm looking for your opinions about my sub's, anything you think I should fix, or I could improve upon...

Well, since I've never contributed anything else, I guess the least I could do is contribute "my two cents".
Wink

It's certainly an improvement over the original subs... but the font still struck me as unreasonably large, especially at times when a whole stack of lines covered the bottom third of the screen.

Even with a casual viewing, I still noticed quite a few typos... as well as more subtle timing/style/grammar issues (such as a sub coming in late, or being split into more lines than necessary, or Harumi's jarring habit of referring to herself by name instead of "I").

That being said, it's still the best copy of H.B.P. that I've ever had... so thanks for that.

If no one else has helped-out, let me know and I'll come up with a more detailed critique... H.B.P. was the first loli-anime that I ever watched, so I feel like it deserves special treatment.
In Love

-Doki


P.S. This being my first post 'n all... I also wanted to say "Thanks!" to, well, everybody who makes L.A.H. what it is!
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Sat May 26, 2012 5:38 am Profile PM
borksa
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Thanks for the improvement.

Sun May 27, 2012 6:06 am Profile PM
Electricus
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Doki:
or Harumi's jarring habit of referring to herself by name instead of "I").
This isn't just Harumi's habit. It's a common practice in Japan for children, especially girls, and those wishing to appear cute, to refer to themselves in the third person. It's one of those cultural things. You'll see it quite a lot.

Sun May 27, 2012 9:06 am Profile PM
Doki
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Electricus:
...to refer to themselves in the third person. It's one of those cultural things. You'll see it quite a lot.

Yeah, I assumed as much (since, as you predicted, I have noticed it elsewhere)... but using the "third person" while talking to herself was a bit more than I was ready to parse.
Laughing

-Doki

Sun May 27, 2012 8:31 pm Profile PM
Badjman
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Heh. Looks good, and as people has stated above, they don't want huge subtitles. So, I'll remake them and go ahead and post the file here. You can stick to the format or learn from it ^~^ I'll make it easy to read. Enjoy Smile


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Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:13 am Profile PM
Phatnaru
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why can't you guys give a simple rapidshare or mediafire file? I'm not installing a program to watch it. -.-

Sun Aug 12, 2012 7:35 am Profile PM
Anyien
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Phatnaru:
why can't you guys give a simple rapidshare or mediafire file? I'm not installing a program to watch it. -.-

Afraid i have no clue what your problem is.

I downloaded it a little while ago and was never asked to download a program or anything else. And it worked without any problems.


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cobaltex
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Badjman:
Heh. Looks good, and as people has stated above, they don't want huge subtitles. So, I'll remake them and go ahead and post the file here. You can stick to the format or learn from it ^~^ I'll make it easy to read. Enjoy Smile
Here is my modified .ass sub file if you want to modify it

hxxp://www.sendspace.com/file/41gxsw

Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:31 am Profile PM
heielectricbatman
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I got an error trying to download it, sendspace gave me an error.txt instead of the file.

Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:26 am Profile PM
Anyien
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heielectricbatman:
I got an error trying to download it, sendspace gave me an error.txt instead of the file.

Downloading it now, a lot slower than usual but nothing else.


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Tue Aug 14, 2012 4:37 am Profile PM Skype
hellspawn3200
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made me use some downloader program, which failed to download, but it also forced the toolbar instillation after i checked the option to not install it.

Tue Aug 21, 2012 5:10 am Profile PM
lingaling
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I don't know what I'm doing wrong, but I'm not seeing any subtitles at all. Last time something like this happened, I just tried different media players, but I've tried every one that I have and still no subtitles.


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Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:35 pm Profile PM
gslayer14
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Downloaded it fine but the password provided doesn't work (unless it's corrupted?) Am I missing something or do I need to re-download?

Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:37 am Profile PM
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