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[Himeno Mikan] Chapter Translations by Mistvern
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Nihility
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Kekekeh. Well, as usual Mistvern, you have exceeded my expectations. I'm really looking forward to your next work. By this point, I'm sure that anything you scanlate will be exceptional. Many thanks to you. Feather Kawaii 2


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Mon Jul 25, 2011 4:51 pm Profile PM
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Alright, Tuesday is here. Time for me to begin on Chapter 8. Goal for today is page 5. May go a little further than that. But I plan on finishing sometime on Thursday or Friday. I should be working on Chiyoko's Kiss by the Weekend.
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About Chapter 8, Sakura-chan is very violent and sassy. Haven't translated this type of Himeno mikan loli yet... Still she is just as naive as everyone else. Himeno Mikan must really have a fetish for sex being the cure for something pain or disease related. Wink
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Exclamation Wow, just figured out why my image quality keeps dropping on some of the pages. Saving with Notepad reduces the image quality (20ish%) and size by like 50%, need to watch out for that.
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I'm gonna slow-down, its only 10 am here and I am though page 6. I won't allow myself to go past page 8 today then. There will definitely be a lot of script re-editing when I'm done with the whole thing.
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Just finished page 13, will update to page 10 (50%) tomorrow. Once I get the script for all 20 pages, then there is probably going to be alot of re-editing done... The male in this one is definitely raping Sakura-chan, even though all Mikan's loli's basically get raped:lol: , this one really feels like it since Sakura-chan keeps fighting back/ arguing. I knew I wasn't going to love this chapter, its more of a "Eh its alright". Looking forward to Chiyoko's Kiss.
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Translating page 17, its is definitely rape, not seeing a touching ending here, just a slightly comedic one. I should have translated the 7th chapter with the shota and the loli named Maya. Will probably do that for my 11th translation.
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Entire script has been organized and translated. Will spend Wednesday fixing it up as much as I can. Me and Dragonice have agreed to release the chapter around Thursday at noon. Will update here to page 10 tomorrow, but will take those 10 down and re-upload the final versions on Thursday.
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Removing Pages 6, 7, and 8 until the script has been fixed. The first 5 pages are okay. 6-8 have major inconsistencies with the rest of the script. Will update to page 10, when 6-8 have been fixed and 9-10 are finished being edited. I used the wrong kanji, it wasn't "infection", it was "soreness", this makes a huge difference in the later sentences, that I can now pick up. Seems like the disease is a perverted one... I was mis-translating alot of the kanji earlier. Found the correct ones though!
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I am liking the story a lot more than before, it seems Sakura-chan is quite the sex demon. I can still see it as rape, but now I can tell that she ENJOYS it, she begs for more of it. Will update to page 12 today as a courtesy.


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Tue Jul 26, 2011 12:13 pm Profile PM
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I'm so glad I found this thread. I had no idea this was where you were posting at. I've been finding your translations posted on another site and wondered who this new wonderful translator was. The website's name is Ecchi Neko Hentai, and I don't like the fact that they don't mention you in any of the credits. The files are intact with your name still on the title page, but all their downloads are depositfile or easyshare-- typical pay-per-click sites.

I'm so glad I found the true source now, and I will keep a close eye on this thread from now on. I think your choice of stories and translating are excellent.


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Anonymlolichan:
I'm so glad I found this thread. I had no idea this was where you were posting at. I've been finding your translations posted on another site and wondered who this new wonderful translator was. The website's name is Ecchi Neko Hentai, and I don't like the fact that they don't mention you in any of the credits. The files are intact with your name still on the title page, but all their downloads are depositfile or easyshare-- typical pay-per-click sites.

I'm so glad I found the true source now, and I will keep a close eye on this thread from now on. I think your choice of stories and translating are excellent.

Still very much a noob at this, but getting quite good at it, considering I've been receiving some nice emails lately. This is my new hobby as of about 3 and a half weeks ago. I definitely plan on doing this for quite a while! Wink

My current goal is to take down ALL of Himeno's works, including the ones I'm not a total fan of (Like the Vegetable Store one). I will also do a few Norri Isawa ones, every once in a while. My buddy Dragonice also uploads the finished comics to a different site, shortly before I upload them here.

Thank you very much for your support! Keeps the motivation flowing! Very Happy

Nihility:
Kekekeh. Well, as usual Mistvern, you have exceeded my expectations. I'm really looking forward to your next work. By this point, I'm sure that anything you scanlate will be exceptional. Many thanks to you. Feather Kawaii 2

You are most welcome! Feather Neko 2 MOTIVATION RISING! I'm going to finish taking down Chapter 8 today! Twisted Evil


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Wed Jul 27, 2011 3:13 am Profile PM
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I too found your translations in Ecchi Neko Hentai. Good thing I was already a lurker, errr member on here.

I'm happy someone decided to translate more of Nohri Isawa's works. You're doing a awesome job, keep up the good work!

Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:27 am Profile PM
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Adding pages 11 and 12. Thats 60% for today, will add the others tomorrow at noon as planned. I see a double "Then" in a dialog bubble on page 12, will re-upload it tomorrow with the rest.

Out of curiosity I looked at some other stories and...
Chapter 6 - is called "High Pressured Warning", Loli is named Momo-chan.

Chapter 7 - is called "So-Sei-Ji!", That doesn't translate, but there was an old japanese movie with the same name, and it translated to "Ge-mi-ni!". Which stands for twins. Loli is named Maya-chan.

Chapter 9 - is called "Papa's Treasure", Loli is named Haruka-chan.

Chapter 10 - is called "Baby Hole" Loli is named Uzura-chan (First time seeing that name Laughing )

Next Isawa Norri story I plan on translating is on page 83 of Show Love. The title is "Yurika's Servant" Deliciously cute loli in that one, plan on doing it after translating "Chiyoko's Kiss".
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Awesome, the rest of the script has been fully translated to fit the new kanji from earlier. The only inconsistencies I see in the story are no mention of the parents in the last page and that Sakura's personality changes are just weird for me. Adding the final dialog to the last 8 pages. We MIGHT release the pages tonight, but we still won't start on the next project until the weekend.
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Alright... I guess me and Dragonice are ready to release the rest of this. Even though the translation seems pretty accurate, it justs... so uncute...


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Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:02 pm Profile PM
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Alright, adding Chiyoko's Kiss as my 10th project. Yurika's Servant will be my 11th translation. Both stories seem delightfully cute, so I am going to fully enjoy them Very Happy

Set to begin on Friday, since I want Chiyoko's Kiss to be a Weekend thing. Will make sure all preparations are made though for a speedy translation when that times comes. Might do what I did during chapter 2 and Pop'n Roll and just do a little of both at the same time, with priority being the Mikan story. Feather-chan cool!
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Yeah... Chiyoko's Kiss just ain't gonna happen Crying or Very sad Its too hard, I just wasted an hour trying... I can't clean the first page, fourth page, sixth, seventh, etc... Too much of the dialog takes place over background art. Until I learn and master the trick to cleaning that text, I will not be able to do Chiyoko's Kiss or Papa's Treasure ANYTIME soon. Moving on!!!! --> I can definitely still do Yurika's Servant and for the Mikan project I will instead do Chapter 7 "Gemini!" Its a pretty decent replacement I guess. Looks crazy easy at the very least Wink


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What version of Photoshop are you using? In CS5, there's a thing called Content Aware. Essentially you just highlight something you want to get rid of and delete it, and Photoshop kinda pulls in data from around it and copies it. So if you want to delete a tree, etc. it's really easy.

Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:58 am Profile PM
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cabb:
What version of Photoshop are you using? In CS5, there's a thing called Content Aware. Essentially you just highlight something you want to get rid of and delete it, and Photoshop kinda pulls in data from around it and copies it. So if you want to delete a tree, etc. it's really easy.

Wow, just watched a few tutorials about "Content Aware", that might be just what I need! Thanks I will most definitely check it/try it out, AFTER I finish Gemini and Yurika's Servant. The script for Gemini might be the easiest I have ever translated, so I won't be switching to another Himeno project until its finished. Will start tomorrow.

Since I use GIMP I won't be able to use it "Content Aware", BUT just found out that GIMP has an exact tool called Re-synthesizer, just need to watch a tutorial on how to use it, and I am good to go! Thanks very much for the tip Feather Neko 2


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Almost ready to get started on something else. I decided to just do Gemini separately from Yurika's Servant.

Now the script in Gemini is really REALLY simple, so I will be able to provide a quick and accurate translation of it. The only problem I see is that they refer to Maya-chan's private part as her "Crack". Don't know what I am going to substitute that with, because leaving it as crack, just makes the dialog seem un-cute.

Will began Friday morning, should finish by Saturday night or Sunday morning.
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Still Thursday where I'm at, but since I'm feeling the urge, I will go ahead and start. Will update pages as I finish them. But only up to 50%.
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SO EASY! Hardly any kanji and basically keeps using the same few. Wish everything was like this Feather Kawaii 2
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Alright thats 50%, went by crazy fast. This is without a doubt the easiest chapter I have done. Just so easy, and its pretty cute too (Sexual Harassment lol). Wink The translation should be nearly 100% accurate. Plan on finishing up on Saturday.
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So EASY!!! The script is 100% organized and translated for pages 9-16. Just need to add to the clean pages. Never had such an easy time translating a comic before. Will release the rest of the pages before Saturday. And should be able to start Yurika's Servant then. Feather Smilie
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Just about done. Dragonice is proof-reading the rest of the pages while I fix up page 11. We should be releasing the rest within an hour.
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Going ahead and adding 9-10 to this post


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And as per usual here are the rest of the pages. 11-16 Smile


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Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:16 pm Profile PM
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Got stuff to do today, so will start on Yurika's Servant tomorrow Feather Neko 2
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Alright time to get started! Goal for today is anywhere between pages 5-10. The script is alot more complicated then Gemini, so a few re-edits might be necessary.
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Definitely going to be re-edits. I hate knowing what the characters are saying, yet still not knowing how to best say it in English. On page 4 where Yurika's says "You're going to be so sorry!" that doesn't seem to fit nearly as much as what she says in Japanese. Page 8 is proving very difficult on how best to have them say something. Will just focus on getting them translated, and when all is done, then me and Dragonice will go through and think of ways to improve the dialog. Feather-chan cool!
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Proceeding at a good pace. I always feel that the story up too the sex stuff is the hardest to translate, so I'm basically done with the hardest part. By no means do I mean that sex stuff is easy, it is just easier to make less mistakes when you can basically guess the dialog from the character's actions. Will stop at 50% today Very Happy
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lol, some of the stuff they say is so mushy mushy lovey lovey, I get chills Laughing Got the script translated up to page 11. Will add the text to the cleaned pages now and will post here shortly.
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Thats it for the first 10, may receive edits later, if better dialog becomes available.
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Many have received final edits, but all have being re-uploaded for numbering change.


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Fri Jul 29, 2011 6:18 pm Profile PM
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Great job on the translations except for one thing: the pages under 10 has to have 0 too otherwise they are out of sequence when read. Also, make a blog too will ya? And start uploading to Depositfile and other free web sites. You can place thge links on your blog and news about what you are working on.

Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:10 pm Profile PM
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hoyeru:
Great job on the translations except for one thing: the pages under 10 has to have 0 too otherwise they are out of sequence when read. Also, make a blog too will ya? And start uploading to Depositfile and other free web sites. You can place thge links on your blog and news about what you are working on.

Not sure what you mean about the under 10 thing. When sorted they go 1 2 3... 10 11 12... etc. Not sure how making it go 01 02 03 will help. Probably misunderstanding you though.

Also, not sure i want too many people aware of what I am working on. Just a small cozy community like this one Smile Which is why I haven't had Dragonice add where to find these projects . Wink
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Alright, page 11 makes Yurika's Servant at 50% now. Hope to finish by Sunday night or Monday around noon. I covered 50% today, so I need a break. May however add page 12 later, so the image in this post doesn't have to look so alone Feather Neko 2
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Adding page 12. No more pages until the whole is completed and all re-edits have been made.
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Sunday morning... Currently finished with 13-15, adding text to 16 and 17.
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16 and 17 are finished. 5 more pages to go! Will re-upload all of the pages, after completion. And For the convenience of others for now on I will add zeros to the front of all pages numbers for a total of 4 digits. So 0001, 0002... 0010, 0011... etc.

On a different note... the attachment layout looks different, I wonder if it can hold more images now.
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*Sigh* The script on page 20 is terribly written... Can't read 2 of Yurika's speech bubbles. Until I can figure out what the symbols are, I am going to be stuck on page 20 for a while.
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Just when I think I am about done, I find out that nearly half the pages have YUKARI instead of YURIKA. This sucks Laughing
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Nope attachment number hasn't increased, still 10. Adding pages 11-20. All editing has been completed.


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Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:35 pm Profile PM
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When sorted it's fine, but when you open say, 1.jpg, it will go 1, 10, 11, 12, 13, all the way to 19, then 2, etc.

When I save your works I just add the zero in myself.

Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:22 am Profile PM
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