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Taakal
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This is the first pic of a series I am working on. Please tell me what you think of it.
A few more will follow in the next few days. Some of those have been on a former version of the board, but I'd like to upload them again, because they're not available here anymore and because I reworked them a bit since the last upload.

EDIT: NEW VERSION OF IMAGE UPLOADED!!!



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Fri Jun 03, 2011 1:21 am Profile PM
Taakal
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Nobody wants to give me a little feedback? What a pity.
Well here's the next one, also never been published yet. The number is not in order because I plan to do some more illustrations between the first one and this one. If you like it, please tell me.


EDIT: NEW VERSION OF IMAGE UPLOADED!!!



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Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:24 pm Profile PM
Drow-chan
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Overall, those pictures are very good. One problem are the curves, though. Now, having a slightly curvy loli is not necessarily a bad thing. The problem here however is that in the first picture it kinda looks as if she is pregnant. A little bit LESS meat on her bones and slightly less curved stomach would do wonders to improve the look.

Also, the guy's face creeps me out a little, but at this point I can't really offer any advice on how to change that.

Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:36 am Profile PM
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They look great, imo.
Thank you very much for sharing them with us Feather Neko 2


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Myriam
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They really look great, even with the little problem Drow-chan noticed.
Keep on that way and i'm waiting for the next ones Smile

Thank you.

Wed Jun 08, 2011 12:06 pm Profile PM
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Taakal:
Nobody wants to give me a little feedback? What a pity.
Well here's the next one, also never been published yet. The number is not in order because I plan to do some more illustrations between the first one and this one. If you like it, please tell me.


Very nicely drawn. I would only have liked to see more of her face. Hope to see more from you.

Wed Jun 08, 2011 1:43 pm Profile PM
cachondomex2008
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Please continue!!!!


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Thu Jun 09, 2011 4:23 am Profile PM MSN
Taakal
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These are the ones that have been posted on a previous version of LAH. But as I said, I reworked them a bit. Mainly the background and partly Vicky's face. But I think you can still see that they are older than the first two. And I am still interested in your feedback.
I am currently working on a pic which shows the situation shortly before these three (different angle again), but I cannot tell when it'll be done. I'll post it here as soon as it's ready.

Wed Jun 15, 2011 7:10 pm Profile PM
cephis
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I likes me some smiles and it really doesn't need any text to be fun, naked loli, erect man, Bam!!! cut and dry

Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:42 pm Profile PM
Taakal
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Thanks for you feedback guys. It's nice to hear from some of you. I'm glad you like my stuff.
And a special thank you to Drow-chan for the honest words. Sometimes as the creator you're kind of blind to your work. I actually didn't want Vicky to be that chubby and I haven't really seen it until you told me so. Well, I went back to the drawing table and reworked the first two images. I think they look much better now. Since I want the new versions to be the definitive ones I deleted the old ones and replaced them with my new versions of a thinner Vicky. So to all of you who downloaded the first versions, be sure to check out the new ones in the respective posts. You can decide which one is better (I'd be especially interested in feedback about the new ones versus the old ones, maybe even from yourself, Drow-chan?), all new visitors will have to take the new ones.

Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:13 pm Profile PM
marck
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Hey, its looking pretty good. your coloring is your strength. spend extra time on the rough lines and youll get some hot stuff. thumbs up

Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:28 pm Profile PM
Taakal
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Can you tell me what's wrong with my rough lines? You have read that the last three are older pictures? I know these are a lot simpler than the newer ones. But I think the contour lines of the newer ones are okay. If you disagree, tell me what's wrong with them. Maybe it helps me to improve.

Wed Jun 22, 2011 10:05 pm Profile PM
fuutafan
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a promising work , you should try to gave your girl more hair on the side of the head Smile


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ABC-Lolie
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Your lines are so neat... This is incredible ><

Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:42 pm Profile PM
gladstone
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I really like the look on Vicky's face. Keep up the good work.


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