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AnoNJG
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I'm working on a visual novel at the moment. It is, of course, Loli themed.
The story should be (I hope) enjoyable and interesting, and of course there is an awesome reward at the end for those of you who like Loli/Woman Yuri. The whole this is pretty much just about one girl, to keep things simple and allow me to really develop the relationship the way I want.
There won't be a ton of interactivity, partly because this is my first such project and I want to keep it simple, and partly because the story I wanted to tell doesn't really allow for much branching.
The graphics will be mostly my regular 3D, with a few backgrounds being lazy photos-with-photoshop-filters-run-on-them. Later in the game the graphics get much more interesting.
I've been working on this for about a month and a half now, all the writing is done and I'm getting started on the graphics now. I've got all the lazy backgrounds done, and I'm getting to work on the character portrait things now. Next will be the rendered backgrounds I couldn't get out of, then the full screen renders for the end part, and then the short movies for the very end.
I'll attach some previews, as well as a screenshot of what the visual novel actually looks like now (very boring).
When I'm done, the visual novel will be available for free (of course) on Windows, Mac, and Linux.
I'll update the thread as I get more done
I appreciate ideas and suggestions, not to mention plain old compliments if you'd like
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Sun Jun 14, 2009 1:31 am |
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What is there to say, other than good luck!
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AnoNJG
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Yeah, not much to talk about yet, huh?
I mostly made this thread to keep me motivated though. I found out a long time ago that if I keep a project to myself it'll never get done.
I'll have more to show later on, once I really start getting more of the graphics done.
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Sun Jun 14, 2009 3:14 pm |
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Lol, I've discovered roughly the same thing.
That's why I'm working on making a website now. Wish me luck; I have no flipping clue what I'm doing.
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Sun Jun 14, 2009 5:53 pm |
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I love eroges! And love yuri+loli!
It seems a nice project! I hope to see it finished soon. Keep working!
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Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:46 am |
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AnoNJG
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Chugging right along. Most of the graphics for the first half are done, which leaves the second half to go.
I need to rewrite a few scenes, but I'm letting the writing 'cool off' while I do the graphics, so once that's done I'll go back and edit away. I hope to be done in another month or so, but I'll keep updating here as I progress.
Fair warning: This is not your standard sugar-sweet eroge. I started writing with a certain plot in mind, and I wrote everything else around that. I also tend to get preachy, but I'll probably edit that out, as my writing tends to be stream-of-consciousness.
What's left to do:
a few backgrounds
more complex graphics for the second half
ending movies
editing
Here's a shot from a few screens in.
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Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:49 pm |
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I dont care if it wont be a real eroge (with h scenes) game. I love your drawnings, and like yuri plots, so I will play no matter what, ok?
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Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:53 pm |
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You've definitely piqued my interest! I love what you've shown so far. I also love stories with a theme and a bit of philosphy mixed in. Your character looks really cute, too!
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Mon Jun 15, 2009 11:22 pm |
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Talking about the main char in the first person is a little unusual.
I am certainly looking forward to this, even though yuri is not my thing.
Keep up the good work there!
Sat
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Tue Jun 16, 2009 10:38 am |
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AnoNJG
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@DarkSign:
There are h scenes, but they're at the end and they aren't really the focus of the story so much as the pay off. I'm glad you like my work, I put a lot of effort into these things. I just hope my writing is good enough.
@Proles:
I really can't write empty fluff (I've tried), so hopefully you won't be disappointed
@Sat:
Well, I decided early on that I wanted it first person. It's a little unusual to write first person and still give the character who's viewpoint you are taking as much personality as I have, but there is a lot of emotion I really want the reader to feel, and this seemed the best way.
Also, as you said, it's unusual; so hopefully It'll stick in peoples minds.
Normally, right around now I would send this thing out to a few people for early testing and feedback. But in the process of making this is sort of become my baby, and I really don't want anyone telling me this or that needs changed...I'm just going to finish it and release it without any beta-testing. This will mean it will take longer, but I can't bring myself to send my baby out unfinished.
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Tue Jun 16, 2009 6:15 pm |
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Understood. I will wait for sure!
And no problems if the H is on end, the story is the matter here. It´s like Type-Moon taste to do the H on end, and it´s nice for me.
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Nice job so far, AnoNJG! You have made a very cute punkette and I'm glad to see her blend so well with the setting. I really like the watercolor background - I think it works much better than if you tried to model 3D houses, etc. I have seen some fairly realistic 3D artwork in my travels and some of it is a turn-off. Your style is much more artistic IMHO. Gambatte!
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Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:20 am |
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AnoNJG
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Worry not friends, for I have not died.
My schedule exploded here recently, I'm working on this project when I can, but between everything else there's just not much time for it.
On an more awesome note, check out that focal blur.
This is just one of those images where everything came out exactly the way I wanted it too. I just need to slap some stuff in the windows and it's done.
@Fogbank:
Thanks. I'm a fan of your work so that really means a lot to me. The problem as I see it with the realistic 3D (of any kind, not really referring to loli here) is that it tried too hard for realism without reaching it. So you pretty much end up in the uncanny valley with no way out. I dodge this just by trying for un-realistic images. The result in the end is imo for better.
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Sun Jun 28, 2009 5:02 am |
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Yay! Good to hear more news. Nice pic btw.
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:20 am |
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So... is this project dead too?
there's at least 4 good prjects already dead in this forum...
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Thu Dec 03, 2009 4:08 am |
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