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mshark190
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I have NEVER drawn loli before, ive only slightly tried my hand at a few anime characters (nn) so.. here is my attempt at loli... plz leave comments/corrections/tips/etc. i want feedback! ty guys 
oh almost forgot... its based off of this pic:
http://littleangelshentai.net/forum/download.php?id=199
Edit: panties suck.. lemme fix em...
there we go 
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Overall... not bad at all, though the eyes look a little square.
But as the saying goes.... practice makes perfect. In time, you'll get better,
though I can't draw like I used too.
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:30 am |
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mshark190
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should I try to fix the eyes?
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 7:45 pm |
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The only thing I see is that the eyes look a little square on the bottom versus the pic you based your drawling off of, that's the only correction I can see. Like I said previously, it's not bad at all, considering it's your first time drawling loli.
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:21 pm |
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mshark190
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well i wasnt trying to copy the other drawing but i just wanted to look at it for the pose etc... im going to try to fix the eyes a bit... maybe change the hair... it looks kinda wierd... ty for teh feedback 
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:40 pm |
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NEEDS MORE CONTRASTS
seriously, either ink the lines or darken them in photoshop, i can hardly see the picture. but yeah, faces don't work that way
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:50 pm |
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My advice would be 1 edit the picture digitally nya. Use photoshop or paintshop pro to cut out the ecess. Right now if you enlarge you see the entire page, but hardly the loli. It makes it hard to really judge and It can be slow loading.
But as for the image. Your body is pretty good imo but the entire head needs a bit of work nya. More specifically it looks strange. The eyes need moved in some and straightened out and hte mouth needs changed. Good luck and I hope to see more though nya.
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| Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:11 pm |
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mshark190
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ok i'm attempting to ink and color it in... oh btw i totally redrew the face and hair... it should be done in like half an hour...
Edit: oh crap i f'cked up the left eye >< ohwell... maybe i can download photoshop and fix it... anyways im putting up the pic now... wow it looks SO much better on paper
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:19 am |
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catboy_j
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Wow I can see what was said about the proportions a bit more nya. The face is a ltitle better. You need to work on the lower waist and legs some, and the chest needs to be a bit slimmer.
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:36 am |
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i think this is it for this one... i would take it into photoshop and mess around with it but im rebuilding my computer right now and the one im on atm doesnt have photoshop...
ill draw another one tomorrow and well see how that goes.... as for drawing itself... is it better to start by copying and then move into my own stuff? or should i go with all that confusing shit in the tutorials now?
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:53 am |
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Fragnostic
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1. Copy some more
2. Follow some drawing tuts (especially proportions and perspective)
3. Doodle by yourself
4. Get Photoshop
5. Play freely with ALL the tools
6. Follow some PS tuts
7. Refine your doodles in PS
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9. Profit!
Not that I actually have talent to draw lolis irl, but PS is usefull...
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:05 pm |
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mshark190
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I'm getting ps soon... i guess i can keep drawing for now then go into ps... thanks 
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 8:06 pm |
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Photoshop can be a bitch sometimes lol nya. If you're really dedicated you might wanna start out when you use photoshop as saving the picture in some kind of format that doesn't degrade the more you save it. Otherwise not JPG. And any effects you know you can do in mspaint but aren't sure about in PS, use MS paint and then go back to PS nya.
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| Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:14 pm |
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mshark190
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Ok pplz heres two more that I just drew... I have decided that i wont be coloring them anymore until i get photoshop. Both are copied of course. The second one i dont really like that much but the first one i absolutly LOVE. I love the style i love the pic... i think thats the style im going to stick with from now on anyways here you go:
oh btw catboy_j i picked the second one with you in mind nya Razz
and i added you on skype
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catboy_j
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Lol I appreciate that, though you could of edited instead of double posted. And you've improved a lot since the original ones you posted.
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